Comments on my site, please

[Preacher]

I didn't even get past the index and honestly don't have to.

Problems:

• 2/3 of you text links are completely blind. If you don't know what a blind link is try searching this forum.
• Your grasp of English is pretty poor. Many LL's will deny or outright ban you for the poor sentence structure & mispellings.
• Is your exit link non-adult?

Suggestions:

• Add text! Like more unlinked sales text, a 2257 declaration, anything, because right now, most of your text on that page is linked.
• That background is horrible. I'm sometimes guilty of this myself, but if you think this looks good, then scrap that background and just go with a plain color. No one wants to get a headache just from looking at porn.

Work on your index first. Then maybe someone will take a look at the rest of your freesite.