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Old 2010-12-03, 08:51 AM   #6
Conran
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Couple of spelling mistakes, and repetitive word use. Spelling mistakes can help SE results of course, but not with words like boys/bays.

Are you targeting US or UK visitors?
You're mixing up the terminology, using typically British words like "wanking" with American spelling of "ass".
Using a term like "motorboating" suggests American audience.
Are you targeting both or specifically a US market? If the latter, I think you need to focus on writing specifically for an American audience and do away with British slang terms. You can always add these into tags.

Speaking of which, you have several specific keywords in your text, but then very loosely connected tags. Personally, I'd add a post to categories, then add tags seen within the copy.
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