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Old 2004-12-09, 10:47 PM   #1
josho
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i'm not a linklist owner (yet) and this is just my opinion, but i have a few suggestions for your site and/or future sites.

1. i would say that your advertising text is too weak, especially so on the index (recip) page.

2. your site name and description are very vague and don't match the content. where is the "extreme fucking"? if i was a surfer and i clicked on "extreme fucking". i wouldn't expect to see a bunch of goofy guys dancing around naked and getting their dicks sucked by ugly bitches. (not trying to hate on your content, i am sure there are many people interested in this type of content. it’s just that i'm trying to make a point.)

your site name and description should be very descriptive of the content of your site. you want the surfer's mind to become locked into a fantasy world about the content on your freesite, so bad that they must have more. your advertising text should then exploit their fantasy as it seeminglys offers up exactly what the surfer desires.

hope this helps,

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