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Old 2005-01-10, 11:17 AM   #1
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another free site review

please write what do u think about my free site? http://www.trannydb.com/fs/both-teenboys8/

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Old 2005-01-10, 12:59 PM   #2
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Hello.

You appear to have identical sales text on each gallery page. You should mix it up a bit. If one phrase doesn't make them want to click thru another might. I personally use larger fonts to force the surfer to see my text.

Your images aren't in the same directory as your html pages. Some link lists won't like that.

Otherwise, it seems fine.
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Old 2005-01-10, 01:30 PM   #3
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so, U put images in each directory??? to how many LL do you submitt than? thanks for answer
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Old 2005-01-11, 10:53 AM   #4
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As UW stated, your pitch is the same on each gallery. Get creative with it and grab the surfer's attention. There are many ways to do this (ie larger fonts, colors that stick out, animation, ect), just get your surfer to read, and more importantly like, your pitch. If you would like, hit me up on ICQ and we'll figure something out. If not, good luck |rasta|
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Old 2005-01-11, 04:06 PM   #5
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is it better right now?

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