newbie question

Smutferret · 2005-01-30, 07:08 PM

Hi tjchuck,

All the points made about your site are all true and any of them could keep you from getting listed. The point I'd like to get across is something that, I feel, might be even more important to you in the long run.

Your sales pitch is lacking. You need to get inside the surfer's head. Create a fantasy they can get lost in and then send them off to a sponsor that will fulfill their need. (For a price that is...

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Take your sponsors tour, work a fantasy around some aspect of it, get some content that works with that fantasy but doesn't give them enough to get off on, write compelling ad copy that pulls them deeper into the fantasy and sends them, frustrated and begging, off to your sponsor for release.

Okay, that was a little long winded but I think you get my point. Work on your ad copy...

Regards,
SF

tjchuck · 2005-01-30, 08:28 PM

Hey Smutferret

I will certainly take this into consideration being that I haven't even got a sniff of a sale in my first 3 months of operation.

2005-01-30, 07:08 PM	#1
Smutferret No matter how good you are at something, there's always about a million people better than you Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: MA, USA Posts: 231	Hi tjchuck, All the points made about your site are all true and any of them could keep you from getting listed. The point I'd like to get across is something that, I feel, might be even more important to you in the long run. Your sales pitch is lacking. You need to get inside the surfer's head. Create a fantasy they can get lost in and then send them off to a sponsor that will fulfill their need. (For a price that is...) Take your sponsors tour, work a fantasy around some aspect of it, get some content that works with that fantasy but doesn't give them enough to get off on, write compelling ad copy that pulls them deeper into the fantasy and sends them, frustrated and begging, off to your sponsor for release. Okay, that was a little long winded but I think you get my point. Work on your ad copy... Regards, SF __________________ Pornication Web Cams TGPX by JMB Software

2005-01-30, 08:28 PM	#2
tjchuck And Lord, we are especially thankful for nuclear power, the cleanest, safest energy source there is. Except for solar, which is just a pipe dream Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Alberta Posts: 225	Hey Smutferret I will certainly take this into consideration being that I haven't even got a sniff of a sale in my first 3 months of operation.