Looking for reviews of my freesite.

cobrasnake · 2005-02-05, 03:51 PM

Oh btw thanks for your comments and advice though.

I agree with you about needing more sales text on my pages.

Figured I would start from here and than try to improve my pages and sales pitches as I go along

caringneo · 2005-02-05, 08:01 PM

You need more sales texts. Also your links need to stand out. Try using a different font.
About getting listed -Your warning page looks ok except for the title tag. On your main page you have to get rid of those banners. The first banner got images which looks like thumbs. The second one is a kind of blind link. Also try to stay away from using the words young and teen together. Make those changes you should be fine in getting listed.
Neo

cobrasnake · 2005-02-05, 08:59 PM

Thanks Neo I will try to work one some of that.

Btw when you say try to stay away from using the words young and teen together you mean during the same text..etc correct?

Just wondering because I thought I fixed the ones that had both words in them? or did you just mean don't use the word young at all on a site that has the word teen in it?

ynuahayt · 2005-02-06, 05:28 AM

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Originally Posted by cobrasnake

Thanks Neo I will try to work one some of that.

Btw when you say try to stay away from using the words young and teen together you mean during the same text..etc correct?

Just wondering because I thought I fixed the ones that had both words in them? or did you just mean don't use the word young at all on a site that has the word teen in it?

I think you should'n't use the word young at all on any sites, it's banned at some sites to use it even in text like "30 year old horny mature feeling young and out looking for cock"

cobrasnake · 2005-02-06, 06:57 PM

Ok I've made several changes to the site and as always feel free to give your opinions.

http://www.sexplusporno.com/sexyteengirls/

Thanks,

2005-02-05, 08:01 PM	#2
caringneo Oh! I haven't changed since high school and suddenly I am uncool Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: PLANET EARTH Posts: 259	You need more sales texts. Also your links need to stand out. Try using a different font. About getting listed -Your warning page looks ok except for the title tag. On your main page you have to get rid of those banners. The first banner got images which looks like thumbs. The second one is a kind of blind link. Also try to stay away from using the words young and teen together. Make those changes you should be fine in getting listed. Neo __________________ Anal Gays

2005-02-05, 03:51 PM	#1
cobrasnake WHO IS FONZY!?! Don't they teach you anything at school? Join Date: Feb 2005 Posts: 49	Oh btw thanks for your comments and advice though. I agree with you about needing more sales text on my pages. Figured I would start from here and than try to improve my pages and sales pitches as I go along

2005-02-05, 08:59 PM	#3
cobrasnake WHO IS FONZY!?! Don't they teach you anything at school? Join Date: Feb 2005 Posts: 49	Thanks Neo I will try to work one some of that. Btw when you say try to stay away from using the words young and teen together you mean during the same text..etc correct? Just wondering because I thought I fixed the ones that had both words in them? or did you just mean don't use the word young at all on a site that has the word teen in it?

2005-02-06, 06:57 PM	#5
cobrasnake WHO IS FONZY!?! Don't they teach you anything at school? Join Date: Feb 2005 Posts: 49	Ok I've made several changes to the site and as always feel free to give your opinions. http://www.sexplusporno.com/sexyteengirls/ Thanks,