Please could I have some comments on this TGP.

[Egypt]

Ok! White background is better as for me.

But you should still do smth with the thumbs - make them bigger - at least of one size. Polish them a bit.

And one more thing - really don't insert text in the middle of thumbs field.

Have you checked out my links?
There are some examples of TGPs there.
And people state that such TGPs convert.

So just learn!