another one to review

Briskit · 2005-04-04, 09:47 PM

www.4hotxxx.com/3-29-05/amateur-teen-stripping/ let me know what yall think. I tried some new things on this one trying to learn tables.

Thanks Briskit

neticule · 2005-04-04, 10:40 PM

Warning Page:
#1. There is 4 sponsor links, 3 is maximum.

Main page looks fine, no rules broken (*that i can see)

Galleries look fine, however, since your using 30 images, why not make 3 galleries instead of just 2? That gives you a whole extra page to advertise on.

Also, I dont know why you have your 2257 unlinked, no linklists i know of count this as a link, so its fine to take out the non linked url and just link the 18 U.S.C.2257 text to that page.

Looks good to me, except for the 4 sponsor links on the warning page.

The advertising needs a little work, but thats all stuff you learn as you go, nothing specific, you will learn how to better catch the surfers eye, but you do have one thing right, IMO, you dont only use banners. I see so many newbies just using banners, its nice to see that you also incorporate text. Try adding some other colors as well though to the text links, just an example, your text "Watch this beautiful teen strip and show you her tight little shaved pussy at Projectteensex.com"

Make "tight little shaved pussy" some other font color. Most surfers wont read even a whole sentence, unless a few words from that sentence catch their eye.

Hope this helped, im sure others will be able to give you some more tips as well

Briskit · 2005-04-04, 11:00 PM

Thanks for your input

Briskit

Rocco · 2005-04-05, 04:46 AM

the only prob I can see are the 4 sponsor links instead of 3 on the warning page

Briskit · 2005-04-05, 07:09 PM

Thanks for the advice anyone else have anything esle to say

Briskit

ronnie · 2005-04-05, 08:16 PM

These things might just be me, but you asked..

I've never liked the thick/3D type table borders, just seem amateurish to me. The galleries, many other ways to display the thumbs, just does'nt look the best. Not saying you need to be a pro webpage designer, actually you can do alot with tables and make a good site. Just my thoughts.

ronnie

Briskit · 2005-04-05, 11:27 PM

Anyone else want to give some feedback. I'm only learning! or Do yall think its ok to submit

Briskit

Presmar · 2005-04-06, 04:05 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Briskit

Anyone else want to give some feedback. I'm only learning! or Do yall think its ok to submit

Briskit

Hi Briskit,

I don't really care for using the word teen along with "girls' or "young". Esp. the latter. Just doesn't sound right to me. I know you state that they are 18 & 19 but still. I'm sure there are other LL that won't list you because of it. Other than that and the 4 sponsors on a page that was already mentioned, it would be ready for you to submit. Just MHO...

Briskit · 2005-04-06, 05:34 PM

Ok thanks Presmar

BigVikingAl · 2005-05-04, 09:44 PM

Briskit. Don't mean to be an ass or anything but I think you should change the site design a bit instead of submitting the same template over and over again and asking for opinions.

2005-04-04, 10:40 PM	#2
neticule A boy without mischief is like a bowling ball without a liquid center Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 437	hmm Warning Page: #1. There is 4 sponsor links, 3 is maximum. Main page looks fine, no rules broken (*that i can see) Galleries look fine, however, since your using 30 images, why not make 3 galleries instead of just 2? That gives you a whole extra page to advertise on. Also, I dont know why you have your 2257 unlinked, no linklists i know of count this as a link, so its fine to take out the non linked url and just link the 18 U.S.C.2257 text to that page. Looks good to me, except for the 4 sponsor links on the warning page. The advertising needs a little work, but thats all stuff you learn as you go, nothing specific, you will learn how to better catch the surfers eye, but you do have one thing right, IMO, you dont only use banners. I see so many newbies just using banners, its nice to see that you also incorporate text. Try adding some other colors as well though to the text links, just an example, your text "Watch this beautiful teen strip and show you her tight little shaved pussy at Projectteensex.com" Make "tight little shaved pussy" some other font color. Most surfers wont read even a whole sentence, unless a few words from that sentence catch their eye. Hope this helped, im sure others will be able to give you some more tips as well __________________ Mom, I'm done! Come wipe!

2005-04-05, 04:46 AM	#4
Rocco www . * * . com Join Date: May 2004 Posts: 1,546	the only prob I can see are the 4 sponsor links instead of 3 on the warning page __________________ Sex and Porn Submit your FreeSites here

2005-05-04, 09:44 PM	#10
BigVikingAl They have the Internet on computers, now? Join Date: Apr 2005 Posts: 148	Briskit. Don't mean to be an ass or anything but I think you should change the site design a bit instead of submitting the same template over and over again and asking for opinions. __________________ MrPornReview/throat-gaggers In depth deepthroat site reviews

2005-04-04, 09:47 PM	#1
Briskit A woman is like beer. They look good, they smell good, and you'd step over your own mother just to get one! Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Texas Posts: 53	another one to review www.4hotxxx.com/3-29-05/amateur-teen-stripping/ let me know what yall think. I tried some new things on this one trying to learn tables. Thanks Briskit

2005-04-04, 11:00 PM	#3
Briskit A woman is like beer. They look good, they smell good, and you'd step over your own mother just to get one! Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Texas Posts: 53	Thanks for your input Briskit

2005-04-05, 07:09 PM	#5
Briskit A woman is like beer. They look good, they smell good, and you'd step over your own mother just to get one! Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Texas Posts: 53	Thanks for the advice anyone else have anything esle to say Briskit

2005-04-05, 08:16 PM	#6
ronnie Wheither you think you can or you think you can't, Your right. Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: midwest Posts: 2,274	These things might just be me, but you asked.. I've never liked the thick/3D type table borders, just seem amateurish to me. The galleries, many other ways to display the thumbs, just does'nt look the best. Not saying you need to be a pro webpage designer, actually you can do alot with tables and make a good site. Just my thoughts. ronnie

2005-04-05, 11:27 PM	#7
Briskit A woman is like beer. They look good, they smell good, and you'd step over your own mother just to get one! Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Texas Posts: 53	Anyone else want to give some feedback. I'm only learning! or Do yall think its ok to submit Briskit

2005-04-06, 05:34 PM	#9
Briskit A woman is like beer. They look good, they smell good, and you'd step over your own mother just to get one! Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Texas Posts: 53	Ok thanks Presmar