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Selling porn allows me to stay in a constant state of Bliss - ain't that a trip!
Join Date: Apr 2003
Posts: 3,914
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I like it.
In a genre infamous for shitty writing, you are definitely slugging that keyboard. I get the sense of a deeper point-of-view which is still obscure, but punching it's way out. That's a roundabout way of saying I'd like to see you clarify your point, or lack of a point, in certain spots. |
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