Will it Fly? I would appreciate feedback

[Pipboy]

"(if you can get the script installed and working) rely on Jave scripts or I frames so they won't help your web site with the search engines."

I'm a programmer, I've written all of the software I use on my sites and this sentence makes me laugh. You clearly don't know what you're talking about but are trying to sound like you do. That probably sounds more harsh than it actually is.