My First Free Site - Listable?

[MrYum]

Hey there Koalat

A few points to consider...

Your site title is a bit long. Try to contain it to 3 to 5 words. And pay close attention to specific link list rules...some limit you to 3 words. But most will go to 4 or 5.

Your 2257 page is 404.

You might want to mix up your text a bit. Having exactly the same text page after page will definitely cut down on sponsor clicks...and will also hurt you in the search engines.

Noticed you're promoting 2 different asian sites on the main and gallery pages. That can be confusing for the surfer...hard to convince him your main asian site is the best one online if you're offering another asian site. If you want to promote something else on those pages, make it something different. I like to call these shocker ads...something to grab the surfer by his balls and get his attention. Maybe a monster dildo site...or a throat jobs site...something nasty

On your gallery pages, that link in the middle "Click Here for More Hot Asians"...funny you put that there...lol. We've been talking about that very kind of link the past few days. With no mention of the sponsor site close by...and no real indication that 'More' link in fact goes to a sponsor site, I'd have to call it a blind link

Oh, and lastly...don't see my recip on there...you gotta fix that right away!

Seriously though...not a bad first attempt. Tighten up some of those issues, and I'd be happy to list it