New site - please comment

[cybersexhound]

I just created a new site after drilling everyone on the adult boards.

I would really like the opinion of 2 sides on this.

1. Link Lists
2. Profits

Please dont be shy I am learning allot here and really appreciate the feedback!

http://www.cybersexhound.com/candykisses/index.html

[Useless]

Hola!

That thumb on the index is a blind link to sponsor. Unlink it or no one will accept it. On the main page, which you've called index.htm, the two thumbs are linked to their full size counterparts. Don't do that. Link them to the galleries they seem to represent. You've done the same thing on the second gallery as you did on the index - linked a thumb to the sponsor. Please don't do that.

From a profitibility standpoint, you need to work on your sales text and calls to action. You seem to work on making the site pretty, but you need to worry more about pushing the sale. Don't wait until the bottom of the gallery to make the sale. Put a banner with text at the top too. You're allowed three links out per page - use them. Also, don't link entire blocks of text. Link a single line or just the call to action.

[Preacher]

Originally Posted by Useless Warrior

On the main page, which you've called index.htm, the two thumbs are linked to their full size counterparts. Don't do that. Link them to the galleries they seem to represent.

This was the first thing that hit me.

And where's your meta keywords or descriptions?

And if you want to use those clickable thumbs to lead to your sponser with the text next to it, maybe figure out some creative way to border it so that it's obvious to a surfer that it's headed to a pay site. Make it look like an ad.

And the most important thing it is lacking for success is my recip.

[MrYum]

Pretty site

Yep, that thumb on entry is blind. Would probably be ok, if you at least splashed the sponsor name across it or something. Also, please ease up on linking entire paragraphs...a line or two...maybe even three is plenty.

Not that a lot of folks check em, but your 2257 link color is almost invisible on that bg color. Obviously, you don't want the surfer following that link...but invisible links aren't good either. Make it match the text color if you want so it doesn't look like a link. I do that a lot on 2257 links.

Some reviewers might give you problems over that thumb in the middle of the main page...even though it does have your sponsor name on it now. It's fine by me, but I have seen others decline cuz it still looks 'thumbish'. Adding a bit more sponsor text across the top of the thumb might help with that.

Yep, link those other 2 thumbs on the main page to your galleries...very odd to have those linked to full sized images on the main page.

Thumbish issue on the sponsor ad on gallery two too. Add some text to that sucker or it'll probably cost you listings on some sites.

Other that those items...add some metas...and my recip...and you're good to go

[kit]

Blindlinks on index.html and index.htm pages.
Should be fixed to be acceptable.

[cybersexhound]

All comments have been implemented - please check out the blind links now - I have modified the images hopefully this will help.

Also Useless Warrior - I lost your rejection email and cant reply to it Is my site acceptable for scorpio links now?