Another day - another try

[natalie]

Originally Posted by Wazza

If English is an issue - don't use much of it

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Click Here To Take The [insert paysite name here] Free Tour
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It's when ESL people attempt to write big paragraphs that things start making little or no sense...

Thats really good advice Wazza. And I might add there are occasionally sponsors who provide text ads too.
Also, Woman if you have a friend who speaks English well just see if they can look over the text for you to check it makes sense.