My frist freesite ..

LiLJay · 2003-12-12, 11:34 AM

hey , i'v just gotten done with my frist freesite ...
can you guys take a look and tell me what you think needs to be done and whats good / etc ,
thanks

http://www.sexonmybeach.com/freesite...lay1/index.htm

ChristyB · 2003-12-12, 12:43 PM

Hi LILJay,

A few pointers from a dfn...

Index:
Has an explicit banner - (the law in most countries is that unless the content would be permissible on the top shelf of a newsagent it has to be protected by a warning page) so your banner needs censoring or replacing with a softcore version.
Also - you have a lot of text in your warning and very little 'adult' text on the page so it's unlikely your site will pick up any search engine hits... to improve it you could:
1/. Add an alt tag to your banner and some adult text to the page (preferably reinforcing - but not spamming - your site name / chosen target keywords.
2/. Include the text (above the banner) in the link - add another line below too and include that in the link and try to pitch it more at turning the surfer on than the fact that the site is free... there's a whole lot of free porn to be had nowadays, you need to give them a better reason to click your ad' & the best one is a hard on.
You could add one more sponsor link to the page (I'd go for a text link, saves b/w & increases your se value).

Main page:
Blue text on the lavender bg is really hard to read - for your sake your sponsor text should be at least as obvious as your gallery links!
Add the line of ad' text to the banner (move it up so it's right underneath) and add at least one more line of text to the ad'.

Your bottom ad needs to say what sort of site it leads to (again with the 'hard-on premise') otherwise it's a blind link (won't get listed) and - it won't get a click without some temptation!
Galleries are better - you have body text & some of it is sexy...
The pics are well optimized in terms of size but look a little too 'touched up' (colors look too rich - if you did that you should undo it - if they came like that live with it, they aren't too bad)!
Add alt tags to every pic to increase text content.
Same problem with the lower ad (gallery 1) and top ad (gallery 2) as on the main page...
Put your gallery 2 banner above the pics & the text ad below them - it'll get you better clicks.

Think about the fact that search engines see every page as an individual site and maybe if you vary your title tags you'll attract more se traffic...
Come up with a 'sexy theme' for your site and write it in the body of the pages starting at page one and working your way through the site - that'll give you more body text for spiders & get the surfers more interested in the ad' text than in the pics (which is what YOU want)...

Don't be disheartened by the size of this post... In general I'd say you've done all the hard work writing the pages & thumbs / picture links etc - now add the cream which will turn it into a sales tool and you're good to go

You might want to scan your spellings on the galleries too - a few typos (typos can be good but too many simple ones aren't good for your credibility with the surfer IMO).
That's my 5 cents worth anyway - feel free to disagree with anything I've said - I really don't mind - free sites are expected to follow rules but individuality is the key

Oh and one last thing - be certain that the site name you use isn't am existing sponsor site name - if it is you won''t get listed anywhere (except by me because I haven't heard of 'wet n wild' but it seems like a good candidate for an existing sponsor site... somebody else here will know I expect).
Anyway - have fun & when you've finished be sure to submit it to my link list

LiLJay · 2003-12-12, 12:52 PM

Thanks alot , really is help ful

Greenguy · 2003-12-12, 01:24 PM

ChristyB - please excuse me if I'm wrong, but does "dnf" stand for "Dumb Fucking Newbie" ?

(and not that you post comes off as such, I just saw it & thought that might be what it meant)

ChristyB · 2003-12-12, 01:40 PM

Hi Greenguy - Yes it does

lol - I'll be a dumb fucking

4 - ever

Oooh - btw - hope you didn't mind me using the term - I just realised where it comes from

my-bad.. forgiveness please

Greenguy · 2003-12-12, 03:07 PM

Whew! I'm really glad that it does mean that cause I was worried I'd have offended you if it didn't

I don't get out much, so I don't know where it comes from anyway

ChristyB · 2003-12-12, 09:19 PM

lol Greenguy,

That's ok then and it was a fine guess

grzepa · 2003-12-13, 11:21 AM

Totally offtopic

@ChristyB

Are you a model ? Or maybe this way: can I find more pictures of you on the internet ?
Hehe if thats you on the photo, yes you're pretty

ChristyB · 2003-12-13, 02:32 PM

Awww shucks grzepa, |blowkiss|
It's very kind of you to say so and yes - there are some pictures of me online but if you'll take my advice you won't look...
This is one of the few times in life when it would probably not be to your advantage to see the bigger picture! |badidea|

LiLJay · 2003-12-13, 06:01 PM

Yes i do agree with him , your very pretty ..

any links to see full size pics? hehe

ttiger · 2003-12-13, 06:04 PM

hey dude good luck with your site

TTiger

LiLJay · 2003-12-13, 06:06 PM

Hey thanks alot bro ( - Dude-) hehe

Opti · 2003-12-13, 06:15 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by ChristyB
Awww shucks grzepa, |blowkiss|
It's very kind of you to say so and yes - there are some pictures of me online but if you'll take my advice you won't look...
This is one of the few times in life when it would probably not be to your advantage to see the bigger picture! |badidea|

Just lap it up Christy ;-)

The BIG picture is that you're a hottie (and a very nice person).. full stop

2003-12-12, 11:34 AM	#1
LiLJay Aw, Dad, you've done a lot of great things, but you're a very old man, and old people are useless Join Date: Dec 2003 Posts: 26	My frist freesite .. hey , i'v just gotten done with my frist freesite ... can you guys take a look and tell me what you think needs to be done and whats good / etc , thanks http://www.sexonmybeach.com/freesite...lay1/index.htm __________________ <p><a href="http://www.reyko.com/in.php?ref=liljay"><img src="http://www.reyko.com/reykobutton.gif" width="120" height="60" border="0"><br> Reyko has quality pics and movies at discount prices<br> </a></p>

2003-12-12, 12:43 PM	#2
ChristyB You tried your best and you failed miserably. The lesson is 'never try' Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: South West UK Posts: 165	Hi LILJay, A few pointers from a dfn... Index: Has an explicit banner - (the law in most countries is that unless the content would be permissible on the top shelf of a newsagent it has to be protected by a warning page) so your banner needs censoring or replacing with a softcore version. Also - you have a lot of text in your warning and very little 'adult' text on the page so it's unlikely your site will pick up any search engine hits... to improve it you could: 1/. Add an alt tag to your banner and some adult text to the page (preferably reinforcing - but not spamming - your site name / chosen target keywords. 2/. Include the text (above the banner) in the link - add another line below too and include that in the link and try to pitch it more at turning the surfer on than the fact that the site is free... there's a whole lot of free porn to be had nowadays, you need to give them a better reason to click your ad' & the best one is a hard on. You could add one more sponsor link to the page (I'd go for a text link, saves b/w & increases your se value). Main page: Blue text on the lavender bg is really hard to read - for your sake your sponsor text should be at least as obvious as your gallery links! Add the line of ad' text to the banner (move it up so it's right underneath) and add at least one more line of text to the ad'. Your bottom ad needs to say what sort of site it leads to (again with the 'hard-on premise') otherwise it's a blind link (won't get listed) and - it won't get a click without some temptation! Galleries are better - you have body text & some of it is sexy... The pics are well optimized in terms of size but look a little too 'touched up' (colors look too rich - if you did that you should undo it - if they came like that live with it, they aren't too bad)! Add alt tags to every pic to increase text content. Same problem with the lower ad (gallery 1) and top ad (gallery 2) as on the main page... Put your gallery 2 banner above the pics & the text ad below them - it'll get you better clicks. Think about the fact that search engines see every page as an individual site and maybe if you vary your title tags you'll attract more se traffic... Come up with a 'sexy theme' for your site and write it in the body of the pages starting at page one and working your way through the site - that'll give you more body text for spiders & get the surfers more interested in the ad' text than in the pics (which is what YOU want)... Don't be disheartened by the size of this post... In general I'd say you've done all the hard work writing the pages & thumbs / picture links etc - now add the cream which will turn it into a sales tool and you're good to go You might want to scan your spellings on the galleries too - a few typos (typos can be good but too many simple ones aren't good for your credibility with the surfer IMO). That's my 5 cents worth anyway - feel free to disagree with anything I've said - I really don't mind - free sites are expected to follow rules but individuality is the key Oh and one last thing - be certain that the site name you use isn't am existing sponsor site name - if it is you won''t get listed anywhere (except by me because I haven't heard of 'wet n wild' but it seems like a good candidate for an existing sponsor site... somebody else here will know I expect). Anyway - have fun & when you've finished be sure to submit it to my link list __________________ ChristyB I have a little spot I like to show to adult webmasters Feeling submissive? Submit your free sites to my directory Last edited by ChristyB; 2003-12-12 at 12:50 PM..

2003-12-12, 12:52 PM	#3
LiLJay Aw, Dad, you've done a lot of great things, but you're a very old man, and old people are useless Join Date: Dec 2003 Posts: 26	Thanks alot , really is help ful __________________ <p><a href="http://www.reyko.com/in.php?ref=liljay"><img src="http://www.reyko.com/reykobutton.gif" width="120" height="60" border="0"><br> Reyko has quality pics and movies at discount prices<br> </a></p>

2003-12-12, 01:24 PM	#4
Greenguy The Original Greenguy (Est'd 1996) & AVN HOF Member - I Crop Pics For Thumbs In My Sleep Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Blasdell, NY (shithole suburb south of Buffalo) Posts: 41,929	ChristyB - please excuse me if I'm wrong, but does "dnf" stand for "Dumb Fucking Newbie" ? (and not that you post comes off as such, I just saw it & thought that might be what it meant) __________________ Promote POV Porn Cash By Building & Submitting Galleries to the Porn Luv Network

2003-12-12, 01:40 PM	#5
ChristyB You tried your best and you failed miserably. The lesson is 'never try' Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: South West UK Posts: 165	Hi Greenguy - Yes it does lol - I'll be a dumb fucking 4 - ever Oooh - btw - hope you didn't mind me using the term - I just realised where it comes from my-bad.. forgiveness please __________________ ChristyB I have a little spot I like to show to adult webmasters Feeling submissive? Submit your free sites to my directory

2003-12-12, 03:07 PM	#6
Greenguy The Original Greenguy (Est'd 1996) & AVN HOF Member - I Crop Pics For Thumbs In My Sleep Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Blasdell, NY (shithole suburb south of Buffalo) Posts: 41,929	Whew! I'm really glad that it does mean that cause I was worried I'd have offended you if it didn't I don't get out much, so I don't know where it comes from anyway __________________ Promote POV Porn Cash By Building & Submitting Galleries to the Porn Luv Network

2003-12-12, 09:19 PM	#7
ChristyB You tried your best and you failed miserably. The lesson is 'never try' Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: South West UK Posts: 165	lol Greenguy, That's ok then and it was a fine guess __________________ ChristyB I have a little spot I like to show to adult webmasters Feeling submissive? Submit your free sites to my directory

2003-12-13, 11:21 AM	#8
grzepa You can now put whatever you want in this space :) Join Date: Nov 2003 Posts: 980	Totally offtopic @ChristyB Are you a model ? Or maybe this way: can I find more pictures of you on the internet ? Hehe if thats you on the photo, yes you're pretty __________________ RATIOS SUCK ? - TRY REALITYCASH !

2003-12-13, 02:32 PM	#9
ChristyB You tried your best and you failed miserably. The lesson is 'never try' Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: South West UK Posts: 165	Awww shucks grzepa, \|blowkiss\| It's very kind of you to say so and yes - there are some pictures of me online but if you'll take my advice you won't look... This is one of the few times in life when it would probably not be to your advantage to see the bigger picture! \|badidea\| __________________ ChristyB I have a little spot I like to show to adult webmasters Feeling submissive? Submit your free sites to my directory

2003-12-13, 06:01 PM	#10
LiLJay Aw, Dad, you've done a lot of great things, but you're a very old man, and old people are useless Join Date: Dec 2003 Posts: 26	Yes i do agree with him , your very pretty .. any links to see full size pics? hehe __________________ <p><a href="http://www.reyko.com/in.php?ref=liljay"><img src="http://www.reyko.com/reykobutton.gif" width="120" height="60" border="0"><br> Reyko has quality pics and movies at discount prices<br> </a></p>

2003-12-13, 06:04 PM	#11
ttiger WHO IS FONZY!?! Don't they teach you anything at school? Join Date: Dec 2003 Posts: 46	hey dude good luck with your site TTiger __________________ life is only a beta version of hell

2003-12-13, 06:06 PM	#12
LiLJay Aw, Dad, you've done a lot of great things, but you're a very old man, and old people are useless Join Date: Dec 2003 Posts: 26	Hey thanks alot bro ( - Dude-) hehe __________________ <p><a href="http://www.reyko.com/in.php?ref=liljay"><img src="http://www.reyko.com/reykobutton.gif" width="120" height="60" border="0"><br> Reyko has quality pics and movies at discount prices<br> </a></p>