My turn for freesite reviews......

[KG Gary]

Preacher - Thanks! I've no experience in design in any way at all, but I've tried to absorb everything I've read on GG&J and I hope I know what looks and feels reasonably good. You'll be getting daily submittals from me very soon.

ponygirl - Thanks for the nice comments. The .JPG thing should be fixed already. I think it was the format that the content I bought came as, and amongst everything else I didn't notice it. Oops.

Jel - Thanks. 800x600 should be fine as I always check. I'm discovering slowly that relying on sponsor-hosted anything could cause problems. I'll have to watch that closely and adapt accordingly.

[KG Gary]

Sorry to be selfish and bump this, but I'd really appreciate more feedback if someone has a moment.

[Surfn]

I've been busy with an offline project or I would have posted earlier. I like those sites above. If they had my recip I'd list 'em

[MrYum]

Originally Posted by KG Gary

Sorry to be selfish and bump this, but I'd really appreciate more feedback if someone has a moment.

Just looked again...I see you fixed the .JPG issue...well done

On that same site, I notice you have a 100% Free Site button next to the sponsor ad. I hit the tour...either that paysite isn't free...or you're using the wrong link code. That would most likely have an negative impact on sales.

On some of your galleries, there are no ads visible at times. General rule of thumb is to make sure there's always an ad visible on galleries...so spread em out a bit more.

Ran across one ad for seventeen live...not a sponsor I'd touch due to the name alone.

Your enter button on Sticky Hairy Plumper is pretty small...that might be you declined by some reviewers.

The other thing I noticed while going through your sites is some of your promos are out of sync with the site. I'm a big believer in offering a single shocker ad or something on free sites...something to grab the surfer if possible. But, some of yours just felt completely 'untargetted'. Like your Skinny Amateur site for example, you seem to be targetting mature on an amateur site. The main page has ads for BBW...still no real amateur promos on the site. The galleries have lesbian promos in addition to mature, and ya even added in toons! lol

That's about all I got...again, your sites are very clean...nice looking sites! There's really not a lot to pick apart...so I had to dig into your promos

[KG Gary]

Surfn - Thank you, Sir. I'll be applying for a partner account very soon.


MrYum - Again, thanks!
-100% Free Site button, I'll have to be more careful on that. I didn't think about it that way.
- Keep an ad showing - gotcha. Thanks.
- Seventeen - I thought that it might cause a problem with some. I'll think about that one.
- Small Enter button. Okay, got it.
- Strangely targeted ads. This was one of the things I was unsure about. Sometimes I just went with what I'm interested in, (I figured I like BBW and mature women so I'll try that ad there), sometimes it was more random. I need to tweak as I go.

Many many thanks folks. It's all a huge help.
Daily submits should begin sometime over the next two days.

[MrYum]

Originally Posted by KG Gary

Surfn - Thank you, Sir. I'll be applying for a partner account very soon.


MrYum - Again, thanks!
-100% Free Site button, I'll have to be more careful on that. I didn't think about it that way.
- Keep an ad showing - gotcha. Thanks.
- Seventeen - I thought that it might cause a problem with some. I'll think about that one.
- Small Enter button. Okay, got it.
- Strangely targeted ads. This was one of the things I was unsure about. Sometimes I just went with what I'm interested in, (I figured I like BBW and mature women so I'll try that ad there), sometimes it was more random. I need to tweak as I go.

Many many thanks folks. It's all a huge help.
Daily submits should begin sometime over the next two days.

Glad to help Gary...always good to see somone new who can actually string together coherent sentences

The targetting will make a significant difference in your sales numbers. After all, you'll be submitting your sites to the categories that best fit your content. So, if you submit to amateurs...the surfers coming to your site are looking for cute amateur girls. They get to your site and find the girl sure enough, but all the ads are for mature, bbw, lesbians...etc.. So, there's not really anything to entice them to go to the paysite...no sale for Gary...and that's a sad sad thing

[KG Gary]

Originally Posted by MrYum

Glad to help Gary...always good to see somone new who can actually string together coherent sentences

The targetting will make a significant difference in your sales numbers. After all, you'll be submitting your sites to the categories that best fit your content. So, if you submit to amateurs...the surfers coming to your site are looking for cute amateur girls. They get to your site and find the girl sure enough, but all the ads are for mature, bbw, lesbians...etc.. So, there's not really anything to entice them to go to the paysite...no sale for Gary...and that's a sad sad thing

Yep, my English is pretty good. Nearly became an English teacher a while back but decided against it at the last minute.

Please don't say "no sale for Gary" again. It's scary. I'll adapt! I promise!

[MrYum]

Originally Posted by KG Gary

Yep, my English is pretty good. Nearly became an English teacher a while back but decided against it at the last minute.

That explains a bunch!

Originally Posted by KG Gary

Please don't say "no sale for Gary" again. It's scary. I'll adapt! I promise!

Thought that might get your attention

Nah, you'll do just fine Gary...you've definitely got the grammar and site building skills. A bit of tweaking with the help of the good folks from these forums...and you're well on your way