Another review

Star Man · 2006-03-07, 11:09 AM

Hey! Just posting another one for review.The main page is a little FPA-ish but I dunno.Well,here it is. http://www.dickheadshit.com/hardcoreblonde.html

picXX · 2006-03-07, 11:44 AM

Besides that your mainpage loaded slowly because of that HPA, and that you should put a 2257 on the "dirty" pages, i thought this one was excellent... but then again, i am not a LL owner

Preacher · 2006-03-07, 11:49 AM

Not my favorite color scheme, but I'm not seeing anything intrinsically wrong with it on the surface.

Fonz · 2006-03-07, 12:01 PM

I don't see a title (on the site itself not the title tage in the header) on your index page.
You recps all point to "nude babes" or similar categories while your content is hardcore. You might consider changing categories here

The rest looks good to me.

Lemmy · 2006-03-07, 12:37 PM

Didn't care for the color scheme at all, and your horizontal pics are smaller that the minimum requirement most places.

MrYum · 2006-03-07, 03:22 PM

Not bad at all Star Man...well done

A couple comments though...of course

Fonz is right...you'll need to add a site title on your entry page. Please note that your site title cannot be the same as...or nearly the same as the paysite you're promoting.

Actually, the color scheme isn't that bad to me. Some of the stuff that gets submitted downright fuckin hurts the eyes

The main page ad is a bit on the large side, but I like the way you handled it. Being integrated into the page design...it works well for me

Lemmy is right on the pic sizes. Those horizontal full size images aren't going to pass muster at most lists. Minimum standards are at least 500 pixels on the long side. These days, I'm seeing 550 and up on most submissions.

ronnie · 2006-03-08, 08:17 AM

I agree, while the color scheme is not bad, it's just not real pleasant on the eyes, think the colors are a little to bright?

ronnie

Halfdeck · 2006-03-08, 09:34 AM

Hi Star Man,

Your color-scheme would tempt me to reject, but frankly I have seen worse.

Go for a unique title for a free site. Don't name them after the paysite you're promoting. Some reviewers will reject you for that.

Banners on index rotates real slowly. Till the paysite name rotates in (after 10 seconds wait) your text is effectively blind.

Also, I find that video sponsor irrelevant to the traffic you're targetting with your free site. Personally, I'd remove that ad, but that's just me.

One thing you definitely need to fix before submitting is the pics size.

Otherwise, you're good to go

Star Man · 2006-03-08, 09:37 AM

Hey,thanks for the feedback guys!

Actually I think I'm going to put this one on hold.I'm working on some more galleries right now that I'm more comfortable with and I don't think some cliche porn chick is going to sale that good anyhow.As far as the colors go,yeah I agree.I tried to retain the theme of the paysite but it didn't work out to well.Hope I didn't waste your time guys.I should have have a new one up today and I would appreciate you guys scoping it out if you get a chance.thanks

2006-03-07, 11:09 AM	#1
Star Man A boy without mischief is like a bowling ball without a liquid center Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: clevel.......don't make me say it! Posts: 436	Another review Hey! Just posting another one for review.The main page is a little FPA-ish but I dunno.Well,here it is. http://www.dickheadshit.com/hardcoreblonde.html

2006-03-07, 11:49 AM	#3
Preacher There's Xanax in my thurible! Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Wherever they screw on my head Posts: 2,441	Not my favorite color scheme, but I'm not seeing anything intrinsically wrong with it on the surface. __________________ NSCash * This Depraved World

2006-03-07, 12:01 PM	#4
Fonz Former pr0n slinger. Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Antwerp, Belgium Posts: 7,932	I don't see a title (on the site itself not the title tage in the header) on your index page. You recps all point to "nude babes" or similar categories while your content is hardcore. You might consider changing categories here The rest looks good to me. __________________ See how I abuse little trees on my Shumi no Bonsai Blog

2006-03-07, 12:37 PM	#5
Lemmy You can now put whatever you want in this space :) Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Next door to a kid with a moped. Posts: 1,492	Didn't care for the color scheme at all, and your horizontal pics are smaller that the minimum requirement most places. __________________ BUY MY PORNSITES!

2006-03-07, 03:22 PM	#6
MrYum Arghhhh...submit yer sites ya ruddy swabs! Join Date: May 2004 Location: Sunny Florida! Posts: 5,108	Not bad at all Star Man...well done A couple comments though...of course Fonz is right...you'll need to add a site title on your entry page. Please note that your site title cannot be the same as...or nearly the same as the paysite you're promoting. Actually, the color scheme isn't that bad to me. Some of the stuff that gets submitted downright fuckin hurts the eyes The main page ad is a bit on the large side, but I like the way you handled it. Being integrated into the page design...it works well for me Lemmy is right on the pic sizes. Those horizontal full size images aren't going to pass muster at most lists. Minimum standards are at least 500 pixels on the long side. These days, I'm seeing 550 and up on most submissions. __________________ Porno Flixxx Submissions SOTI Site Submissions Free Porn Resource Submissions

2006-03-07, 11:44 AM	#2
picXX They have the Internet on computers, now? Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 141	Besides that your mainpage loaded slowly because of that HPA, and that you should put a 2257 on the "dirty" pages, i thought this one was excellent... but then again, i am not a LL owner

2006-03-08, 08:17 AM	#7
ronnie Wheither you think you can or you think you can't, Your right. Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: midwest Posts: 2,274	I agree, while the color scheme is not bad, it's just not real pleasant on the eyes, think the colors are a little to bright? ronnie

2006-03-08, 09:34 AM	#8
Halfdeck You can now put whatever you want in this space :) Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: New Haven, CT Posts: 985	Hi Star Man, Your color-scheme would tempt me to reject, but frankly I have seen worse. Go for a unique title for a free site. Don't name them after the paysite you're promoting. Some reviewers will reject you for that. Banners on index rotates real slowly. Till the paysite name rotates in (after 10 seconds wait) your text is effectively blind. Also, I find that video sponsor irrelevant to the traffic you're targetting with your free site. Personally, I'd remove that ad, but that's just me. One thing you definitely need to fix before submitting is the pics size. Otherwise, you're good to go __________________ Success is going from failure to failure without a loss of enthusiasm.

2006-03-08, 09:37 AM	#9
Star Man A boy without mischief is like a bowling ball without a liquid center Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: clevel.......don't make me say it! Posts: 436	Hey,thanks for the feedback guys! Actually I think I'm going to put this one on hold.I'm working on some more galleries right now that I'm more comfortable with and I don't think some cliche porn chick is going to sale that good anyhow.As far as the colors go,yeah I agree.I tried to retain the theme of the paysite but it didn't work out to well.Hope I didn't waste your time guys.I should have have a new one up today and I would appreciate you guys scoping it out if you get a chance.thanks Last edited by Star Man; 2006-03-08 at 09:46 AM..