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emmanuelle · 2006-03-15, 11:56 PM

You might consider having someone who's native language is English edit your site. Correcting all of those spelling, punctuation & grammatical errors might help you to appear more credible. Having an office instead of a mail drop at the UPS store would probably help too.

tk1models · 2006-03-16, 11:02 AM

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Originally Posted by emmanuelle

You might consider having someone who's native language is English edit your site. Correcting all of those spelling, punctuation & grammatical errors might help you to appear more credible. Having an office instead of a mail drop at the UPS store would probably help too.

Thanks for the critique. I will get a more advanced webmaster to fix that problem soon.

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