Semi Review

Star Man · 2006-03-24, 05:16 PM

Hey! Been sick latley but ready to start building again

Heres another one.The reason I said semi is because it's basicly the same one as I posted last time but I changed the layout a bit to keep it fresh.I think everythings good to go but would like a second opinion before I pimp this bitch out

As always thanks and constructive critisism or any suggestions to make it look nicer more then welcome!

http://www.dickheadshit.com/bustychr...istyindex.html

MrYum · 2006-03-24, 06:35 PM

Welcome back Star Man...glad you're feeling better

Let's get ya under way so you can 'pimp that bitch out'...lol.

Entry page...nothing that would get ya declined, but just a couple observations

Blue links on a black background don't exactly leap off the page. Looks at how the red link 'pops' and is so much more visible. If you want blue...try using aqua...it'll jump off the page much better.

Noticed you have your exit link on the left and enter on the right. Most folks read left to right...show them the enter link first. If they really want to exit...they'll see that link too.

Oh, and if you would please...center up my recip. It's a little thing, but makes me happy

Main page...

Perhaps slightly banner heavy, but looks good

Galleries...

Again, perhaps a little image heavy. According to my handy dandy speed tester, that page will take about 32 seconds to load on dial up. Came up fast for me, but I'm on cable. Something to consider when thinking of all your surfers....some are still on dialup.

Also, galleries look a little busy...not anything I'd decline the site for though.

All in all...well done

Again, my comments are more performance tweaks than reasons for decline

Oh, and CUTE GIRL..hubba hubba!

Added: Just noticed you do have 4 outbound links on the galleries. That will cause rejections with some reviewers

Toby · 2006-03-24, 06:54 PM

Check your site using FireFox. Your ENTER and EXIT links don't work.

Star Man · 2006-03-24, 07:11 PM

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Welcome back Star Man...glad you're feeling better

Thanks man!

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Just noticed you do have 4 outbound links on the galleries. That will cause rejections with some reviewers

Hmmm Maybe I misunderstood.I thought we were alowed a extra outgoing link on galleries such as my first attempt http://www.dickheadshit.com/free1.html Does that only go for hubs and such?

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Oh, and if you would please...center up my recip. It's a little thing, but makes me happy

Np.Do you mean center the text within the box or the whole recip with the rest of them?Also what is the ideal setup for your recip? Box size,outline size color etc.?

Anyhow I'm gonna tweak it up and get it out.

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Check your site using FireFox. Your ENTER and EXIT links don't work.

Oh man.Let me see what i can do about that.

MrYum · 2006-03-24, 09:31 PM

Hmmm...I only see 3 outbound on that gallery. In any case, I'm probably not quite a strict as some when counting links. Especially if it's a regular submitter and they build clean sites. But, the letter of the rule is 3 outbound links per page...including any links to your own sites. So, if you have a hub link...that would leave you 2 sponsor links on the page. This applies to all pages of the site. The only pretty consistent waivers are, recips (of course)...and 2257 links if you use em.

Again, some folks are more strict that others. It's not that big of a loss to hold yourself to 3 outbound and get the wider acceptance ratios. That ol 'don't give reasons to decline' thing yet again

No biggie on the recip at all...I was just referring to centering within the table cell itself. Just so it's balanced instead of all left aligned. As to sizing, again...I'm just not that picky. As long as the recip is there, visible and hopefully looks at least 'ok'...we're good to go

I looked at the site in FF Toby...those links work fine for me. Just check in IE...looks good there too. What were you seeing?

Toby · 2006-03-24, 10:08 PM

Evidently when he switched them left for right the problem resolved itself, but what I was seeing on both links with FF and Mozilla was an unnamed anchor to the same page.

www.dickheadshit.com/bustychristy/bustychristyindex.html#

2006-03-24, 05:16 PM	#1
Star Man A boy without mischief is like a bowling ball without a liquid center Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: clevel.......don't make me say it! Posts: 436	Semi Review Hey! Been sick latley but ready to start building again Heres another one.The reason I said semi is because it's basicly the same one as I posted last time but I changed the layout a bit to keep it fresh.I think everythings good to go but would like a second opinion before I pimp this bitch out As always thanks and constructive critisism or any suggestions to make it look nicer more then welcome! http://www.dickheadshit.com/bustychr...istyindex.html

2006-03-24, 06:35 PM	#2
MrYum Arghhhh...submit yer sites ya ruddy swabs! Join Date: May 2004 Location: Sunny Florida! Posts: 5,108	Welcome back Star Man...glad you're feeling better Let's get ya under way so you can 'pimp that bitch out'...lol. Entry page...nothing that would get ya declined, but just a couple observations Blue links on a black background don't exactly leap off the page. Looks at how the red link 'pops' and is so much more visible. If you want blue...try using aqua...it'll jump off the page much better. Noticed you have your exit link on the left and enter on the right. Most folks read left to right...show them the enter link first. If they really want to exit...they'll see that link too. Oh, and if you would please...center up my recip. It's a little thing, but makes me happy Main page... Perhaps slightly banner heavy, but looks good Galleries... Again, perhaps a little image heavy. According to my handy dandy speed tester, that page will take about 32 seconds to load on dial up. Came up fast for me, but I'm on cable. Something to consider when thinking of all your surfers....some are still on dialup. Also, galleries look a little busy...not anything I'd decline the site for though. All in all...well done Again, my comments are more performance tweaks than reasons for decline Oh, and CUTE GIRL..hubba hubba! Added: Just noticed you do have 4 outbound links on the galleries. That will cause rejections with some reviewers __________________ Porno Flixxx Submissions SOTI Site Submissions Free Porn Resource Submissions

2006-03-24, 06:54 PM	#3
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2006-03-24, 09:31 PM	#5
MrYum Arghhhh...submit yer sites ya ruddy swabs! Join Date: May 2004 Location: Sunny Florida! Posts: 5,108	Hmmm...I only see 3 outbound on that gallery. In any case, I'm probably not quite a strict as some when counting links. Especially if it's a regular submitter and they build clean sites. But, the letter of the rule is 3 outbound links per page...including any links to your own sites. So, if you have a hub link...that would leave you 2 sponsor links on the page. This applies to all pages of the site. The only pretty consistent waivers are, recips (of course)...and 2257 links if you use em. Again, some folks are more strict that others. It's not that big of a loss to hold yourself to 3 outbound and get the wider acceptance ratios. That ol 'don't give reasons to decline' thing yet again No biggie on the recip at all...I was just referring to centering within the table cell itself. Just so it's balanced instead of all left aligned. As to sizing, again...I'm just not that picky. As long as the recip is there, visible and hopefully looks at least 'ok'...we're good to go I looked at the site in FF Toby...those links work fine for me. Just check in IE...looks good there too. What were you seeing? __________________ Porno Flixxx Submissions SOTI Site Submissions Free Porn Resource Submissions

2006-03-24, 10:08 PM	#6
Toby Lonewolf Internet Sales Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Houston Posts: 4,826	Evidently when he switched them left for right the problem resolved itself, but what I was seeing on both links with FF and Mozilla was an unnamed anchor to the same page. www.dickheadshit.com/bustychristy/bustychristyindex.html# __________________ Latex Vixens Babes In Boots Well Heeled Women Dressing For Sex Stocking Vixens