My first FS :) Could You review it?

Linkster · 2006-07-27, 05:14 PM

The thing that jumped out at me was - nothing - not being sarcastic, but this is supposed to grab the surfer by the balls and get him to join a site

An example is on your main.htm - at the bottom - the sales text is so close to the background color that you can barely read it - and youve only got about a split second for that surfer to decide he wants to even read the text let alone click on it

Preacher · 2006-07-27, 05:32 PM

Every page scrolls horizontally at 800x600 which will get you declined at most major linklists.

Blind text links:

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And personally, I'd add some metatags at least to the index.

2006-07-27, 05:14 PM	#1
Linkster NO! Im not a female - but being a dragon, I do eat them. Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Sex Delta Posts: 5,084	The thing that jumped out at me was - nothing - not being sarcastic, but this is supposed to grab the surfer by the balls and get him to join a site An example is on your main.htm - at the bottom - the sales text is so close to the background color that you can barely read it - and youve only got about a split second for that surfer to decide he wants to even read the text let alone click on it __________________ Pussy Chompers Porn Links NSCash

2006-07-27, 05:32 PM	#2
Preacher There's Xanax in my thurible! Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Wherever they screw on my head Posts: 2,441	Every page scrolls horizontally at 800x600 which will get you declined at most major linklists. Blind text links: This is one tea-baggin' babe! She sucks this guys cock so hard it almost hurts! Nice facial at the end too. Watch Full Version!!! Latina ladies are worldwide known for their huge sex apetite! We bring you the entire line of quality DVD videos from the HOTTEST LATINA cuties in action... 100% uncensored action at your fingertips, GET IT! Enjoy the satisfaction of watching the most beautiful latina women sucking huge cocks and getting fucked hard in every hole, 24 hours a day, all in DVD quality! 100's of Full-Lengh Movies just one click away! And personally, I'd add some metatags at least to the index. __________________ NSCash * This Depraved World