My first FS :) Could You review it?

Lady Push · 2006-08-03, 10:35 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Magix

it's only My opinion but on the second site the background it's just eye braking, one look and i want to click on the X at the top of my broswer.. try to use more soft colours on backgrounds

That was kind of experiment with the background.
Sorry about that

and thanks for the tip!

MrYum · 2006-08-03, 10:59 AM

Hi Lady Push

A page by page...

Entry...

Only issue I see here is the red onhover color really clashes with the blue background. It's one of the downsides to using a varying bg color...makes it hard to get the text and links to look right.

Main...

No issues here other than the same onhover link color. Especially that lower banner...big turn off to surfers

Gallery one...

Some reviewers may not like a half page ad above the content. Causes quite a bit of scroll to get to the actual site content. I seem to recall reading somewhere that you should be able to at least see the top edge of the content without scrolling down.

The top text link is still blind (Preacher pointed this one out)...

The 'Get Instant Access' button is fine when it's at least close to an ad for the paysite, but down at the bottom all by itself...it doesn't make much sense. Instant access to what???
Throw some juicy text under it...'All the Hot Latina Videos at Paysite'...something like that would help.

Gallery two...

That top link is still blind...
"This is one tea-baggin' babe! She sucks this guys cock so hard it almost hurts! Nice facial at the end too. Watch Full Version!!!"

The lower text link is borderline blind. Who's 'We'???

You'll be much better off mentioning the paysite name in your links until you're more comfortable in how to make a link that's not blind. Don't want to give reviewers reasons to decline your sites...keep em tight and clean and you'll get listed a lot more consistently

2006-08-03, 10:59 AM	#2
MrYum Arghhhh...submit yer sites ya ruddy swabs! Join Date: May 2004 Location: Sunny Florida! Posts: 5,108	Hi Lady Push A page by page... Entry... Only issue I see here is the red onhover color really clashes with the blue background. It's one of the downsides to using a varying bg color...makes it hard to get the text and links to look right. Main... No issues here other than the same onhover link color. Especially that lower banner...big turn off to surfers Gallery one... Some reviewers may not like a half page ad above the content. Causes quite a bit of scroll to get to the actual site content. I seem to recall reading somewhere that you should be able to at least see the top edge of the content without scrolling down. The top text link is still blind (Preacher pointed this one out)... The 'Get Instant Access' button is fine when it's at least close to an ad for the paysite, but down at the bottom all by itself...it doesn't make much sense. Instant access to what??? Throw some juicy text under it...'All the Hot Latina Videos at Paysite'...something like that would help. Gallery two... That top link is still blind... "This is one tea-baggin' babe! She sucks this guys cock so hard it almost hurts! Nice facial at the end too. Watch Full Version!!!" The lower text link is borderline blind. Who's 'We'??? You'll be much better off mentioning the paysite name in your links until you're more comfortable in how to make a link that's not blind. Don't want to give reviewers reasons to decline your sites...keep em tight and clean and you'll get listed a lot more consistently __________________ Porno Flixxx Submissions SOTI Site Submissions Free Porn Resource Submissions