Free Site Review

x69sex · 2006-08-23, 05:08 AM

Hello,

I am pretty new on this board wich i know thanks to a friend webmaster.

So i tried to build a Free site, following the rules, but it seems that my free site has got a problem because some Links Sites refused me.
The URL : http://www.x69sex.com/sweet-girl/hot-girl/

Can you please tell me what goes wrong with it ?

Thank you

X69sex

Greenguy · 2006-08-23, 08:06 AM

The lack of nudity would cause me to decline it (unless she was in Lingerie, then I could just move it to that category)

x69sex · 2006-08-23, 08:47 AM

Ah ok. So my site is well built, it is just a problem of thumbs then.

I am asking something else about this kinf of sites ( solo girls ) . I what category to submit it ? Because there are amateur, teens and sometime solo girls ( in that case i submit in this category ). What difference would you make between amateur ad teen ?

Greenguy · 2006-08-23, 09:30 AM

Age?

x69sex · 2006-08-23, 10:59 AM

I am 29 but i am not american or english so maybye my sentences are not correct but i try to do my best

JustRobert · 2006-08-23, 11:52 AM

Greenie just changed his rules to except your wider design but most have not changed over just yet so you would get declined for sidescroll.

Unfortunately the model is in a bikini in the second gallery or it could fit into the panties section but you have a bigger problem. This model is a non nude model so you "should" get declined for that 2nd line of text saying she will lick her boobs and play with her pussy. That line of text is a lie and anyone who pays will charge back for it which means no money for you and a waste of your time.

Your sponsor has topless models. Try using them in teen/panty/lingerie with proper sales text selling tease not sex and you will be fine.

x69sex · 2006-08-23, 12:40 PM

Hum ok i see. Actually i didn't know this model was a non nude model, so there is a problem with my text sales that is wright.

I will try with another model.

I thank you for your help JustRobert

Mateusz · 2006-08-23, 12:43 PM

What Greenie said and well.. since english is not my native language either I try not to be too creative

I suggest you to do the same.
You can get banned for sales text like She loves to show off my HOT body ! or Wanna see her standing on the couch long legs and bend over
Other than that I dont see any reason why I shouldn't list your site

Preacher · 2006-08-23, 12:53 PM

I declined it because
"Watch her in the smallest wicked weasel Bikini's and other HOT outfits!" Is completely blind.

"She loves to show off my HOT body !" Is also blind but hysterical nontheless...

If English is not your primary language I suggest you either ALWAYS use the name of the paysite in your text or the word 'Join'.

virgohippy · 2006-08-23, 03:58 PM

JustRobert is right.

FYI, the mirror you submitted to me is listed in my panties section.

x69sex · 2006-08-23, 07:39 PM

Ok I thank you for your answers.

I am not so far to make a nice free site i think with your advices. Next time i will post my free site here before submitting

Quote:

I declined it because
"Watch her in the smallest wicked weasel Bikini's and other HOT outfits!" Is completely blind.

This sentence is on a FHG made by the sponsor so i suppose it is the truth ?

virgohippy · 2006-08-23, 07:48 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by x69sex

This sentence is on a FHG made by the sponsor so i suppose it is the truth ?

Just cuz someone else did it doesn't make it right.

I still don't know what is a blind link. But reviewers seem to like it when I mention where the surfer is going to. Drop in a "over at SPONSOR_NAME" and that should be a step in the right direction. Just don't say something is over on the sponsors site when it's not.

JustRobert · 2006-08-23, 09:26 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by x69sex

I thank you for your help JustRobert

No problem

If the blind links were fixed and a panty recip put in place then I would of listed it as well. That ass in a tiny thong is mighty nice

MrYum · 2006-08-24, 03:33 AM

Hi x69sex...glad to see you took my advice and posted...an excellent decision

As to why I sent you the message...I'll attempt to recall the reasons. But, in all honesty I was very tired at the time and am not entirely in work mode as I'm away from home at the moment.

Anyway...let's see here...

I seem to recall the site didn't have a title tag when I looked at it...though I may be remembering another site.

The page width was over 800 pixels wide.

The paysite link on the bottom of your main page is blind.

There's an excellent thread in these forums about blind links, but I'm not on my home system and don't have a link to it handy here.

The changing font size on hover is annoying. It's okay to change a font color on hover, but when the the text actually jumps around...it's downright disturbing.

Both of the top links on gallery one are blind.

Both top links on gallery two are blind.

That's about it...

Great idea to post your next site for a quick review before submitting. You'll find very helpful people here to get you started on the right foot

Depending on the situation here...hopefully, I'll be back home in a few days and be more active on the forums again myself

2006-08-23, 05:08 AM	#1
x69sex Rock stars ... is there anything they don't know? Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Paris Posts: 15	Free Site Review Hello, I am pretty new on this board wich i know thanks to a friend webmaster. So i tried to build a Free site, following the rules, but it seems that my free site has got a problem because some Links Sites refused me. The URL : http://www.x69sex.com/sweet-girl/hot-girl/ Can you please tell me what goes wrong with it ? Thank you X69sex

2006-08-23, 08:06 AM	#2
Greenguy The Original Greenguy (Est'd 1996) & AVN HOF Member - I Crop Pics For Thumbs In My Sleep Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Blasdell, NY (shithole suburb south of Buffalo) Posts: 41,929	The lack of nudity would cause me to decline it (unless she was in Lingerie, then I could just move it to that category) __________________ Promote POV Porn Cash By Building & Submitting Galleries to the Porn Luv Network

2006-08-23, 09:30 AM	#4
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2006-08-23, 11:52 AM	#6
JustRobert Bow Ties Are Cool Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: California Posts: 9,653	Greenie just changed his rules to except your wider design but most have not changed over just yet so you would get declined for sidescroll. Unfortunately the model is in a bikini in the second gallery or it could fit into the panties section but you have a bigger problem. This model is a non nude model so you "should" get declined for that 2nd line of text saying she will lick her boobs and play with her pussy. That line of text is a lie and anyone who pays will charge back for it which means no money for you and a waste of your time. Your sponsor has topless models. Try using them in teen/panty/lingerie with proper sales text selling tease not sex and you will be fine. __________________ Submit Your Galleries To The Erotic To Naughty Network!

2006-08-23, 12:53 PM	#9
Preacher There's Xanax in my thurible! Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Wherever they screw on my head Posts: 2,441	I declined it because "Watch her in the smallest wicked weasel Bikini's and other HOT outfits!" Is completely blind. "She loves to show off my HOT body !" Is also blind but hysterical nontheless... If English is not your primary language I suggest you either ALWAYS use the name of the paysite in your text or the word 'Join'. __________________ NSCash * This Depraved World

2006-08-23, 08:47 AM	#3
x69sex Rock stars ... is there anything they don't know? Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Paris Posts: 15	Ah ok. So my site is well built, it is just a problem of thumbs then. I am asking something else about this kinf of sites ( solo girls ) . I what category to submit it ? Because there are amateur, teens and sometime solo girls ( in that case i submit in this category ). What difference would you make between amateur ad teen ?

2006-08-23, 10:59 AM	#5
x69sex Rock stars ... is there anything they don't know? Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Paris Posts: 15	I am 29 but i am not american or english so maybye my sentences are not correct but i try to do my best

2006-08-23, 12:40 PM	#7
x69sex Rock stars ... is there anything they don't know? Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Paris Posts: 15	Hum ok i see. Actually i didn't know this model was a non nude model, so there is a problem with my text sales that is wright. I will try with another model. I thank you for your help JustRobert

2006-08-23, 12:43 PM	#8
Mateusz Screw you, guys. I'm going home. Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Gliwice, Poland Posts: 996	What Greenie said and well.. since english is not my native language either I try not to be too creative I suggest you to do the same. You can get banned for sales text like She loves to show off my HOT body ! or Wanna see her standing on the couch long legs and bend over Other than that I dont see any reason why I shouldn't list your site

2006-08-23, 03:58 PM	#10
virgohippy Madness is like gravity. All it takes is a little... push. Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: California Posts: 1,679	JustRobert is right. FYI, the mirror you submitted to me is listed in my panties section. __________________ ~Warm and Fuzzy.

2006-08-24, 03:33 AM	#14
MrYum Arghhhh...submit yer sites ya ruddy swabs! Join Date: May 2004 Location: Sunny Florida! Posts: 5,108	Hi x69sex...glad to see you took my advice and posted...an excellent decision As to why I sent you the message...I'll attempt to recall the reasons. But, in all honesty I was very tired at the time and am not entirely in work mode as I'm away from home at the moment. Anyway...let's see here... I seem to recall the site didn't have a title tag when I looked at it...though I may be remembering another site. The page width was over 800 pixels wide. The paysite link on the bottom of your main page is blind. There's an excellent thread in these forums about blind links, but I'm not on my home system and don't have a link to it handy here. The changing font size on hover is annoying. It's okay to change a font color on hover, but when the the text actually jumps around...it's downright disturbing. Both of the top links on gallery one are blind. Both top links on gallery two are blind. That's about it... Great idea to post your next site for a quick review before submitting. You'll find very helpful people here to get you started on the right foot Depending on the situation here...hopefully, I'll be back home in a few days and be more active on the forums again myself __________________ Porno Flixxx Submissions SOTI Site Submissions Free Porn Resource Submissions