Would you list this free site ?

[MrYum]

Hmmm...might as well start at the index...

Playing on the girls gone wild name huh |badidea|

Personally, I won't touch teen sites with the word little on them.

No ads on the warning page always sends up red flags. But, it looks like you're trying to do a slicker graphical appearance...which the look is very nice by the way

2257 pages aren't supposed to have any links because they're not supposed to be another opportunity to sell. They're a legal compliance page...nothing more. Which yours does still have some links, though I'd probably ignore them.

Your exit link is to a mainstream domain now. But, with nothing on that domain...it raises red flags as to what will end up on it.

The webmasters link...no idea why you'd have that there. Free sites are about surfers...not about webmasters. If you leave it there, most reviewers will include it in your three outbound links per page.

Huge blind links on your main page...and the word little again.

Huge blind links on your gallery pages...and little again.

Content wise...you're about 40 seconds short. Most link sites have a 120 seconds of video rule. Also, some may decline the site based solely on the boring nature of the vids. Hell, she doesn't even take her dress off until near the end of the 3rd vid.

Again, it IS a damn nice looking site. But, it does need quite a bit of tweaking.

[Itchy]

Originally Posted by MrYum

Hmmm...might as well start at the index...

Playing on the girls gone wild name huh |badidea|

Personally, I won't touch teen sites with the word little on them.

No ads on the warning page always sends up red flags. But, it looks like you're trying to do a slicker graphical appearance...which the look is very nice by the way

2257 pages aren't supposed to have any links because they're not supposed to be another opportunity to sell. They're a legal compliance page...nothing more. Which yours does still have some links, though I'd probably ignore them.

Your exit link is to a mainstream domain now. But, with nothing on that domain...it raises red flags as to what will end up on it.

The webmasters link...no idea why you'd have that there. Free sites are about surfers...not about webmasters. If you leave it there, most reviewers will include it in your three outbound links per page.

Huge blind links on your main page...and the word little again.

Huge blind links on your gallery pages...and little again.

Content wise...you're about 40 seconds short. Most link sites have a 120 seconds of video rule. Also, some may decline the site based solely on the boring nature of the vids. Hell, she doesn't even take her dress off until near the end of the 3rd vid.

Again, it IS a damn nice looking site. But, it does need quite a bit of tweaking.

Thank you very much Learning can be so easy thanks to people like you!

The name thing well that was the name of the video I chopped up.
K no more "little" will be used on a teen site.
I changed it off to a 2257 page with no links to sites.
The exit link well I own that name and its never going to have porn on it but you'd have to know me I guess for that one as im not a cheater but if you don't know me you wouldn't know that
Any ways the reason behind useing that domain over others would be cause i plan on selling the name and the more in bound links to it the more its worth.
I added one more gallery page and 2 more clips so now i should be in the 120 sec range +- a sec
I changed the text on the banner areas so now they read a bit better

Yes im playing more on the nicer site more people would link
thats why no banner or link to sponsor on the index page.

The clips get hotter as the days of the week go by lol
I just hated to waste a couple mins of video
So im looking at 10 sites out of this 20 min video

Thanks for looking and helping me out on a friday afternoon

Itchy

[MrYum]

Originally Posted by Itchy

Thank you very much Learning can be so easy thanks to people like you!

The name thing well that was the name of the video I chopped up.
K no more "little" will be used on a teen site.

Probably a safer choice.

I do see now that the name of the paysite has little in it too

Obviously, there's not much you can do about that...other than not promote it as teen. Which it looks to be a pretty straight up hardcore site, so teen isn't necessary to promote it. Kind of a sticky join page on that sucker too.

Originally Posted by Itchy

I changed it off to a 2257 page with no links to sites.

Yep, personally I'd ignore the few outlinks that 2257 page has on it. Can't speak for other reviewers, so be aware that some may still balk at it since it does still have 'links'.

Originally Posted by Itchy

The exit link well I own that name and its never going to have porn on it but you'd have to know me I guess for that one as im not a cheater but if you don't know me you wouldn't know that

Exactly...thanks for understanding

Originally Posted by Itchy

Any ways the reason behind useing that domain over others would be cause i plan on selling the name and the more in bound links to it the more its worth.

Ah, see now that right there is exactly the reason that exit domain is going to send up red flags. You're planning on selling it...so you have no control over what ends up on the other end of that exit link.

Nor is that the expected 'use' of an exit link. The exit is supposed to provide an exit from adult content...nothing more. Definitely not intended to be used to pump up a domain so it can be sold.

Most free site submitters use a search engine for their exits....which is a waste. I have seen a few folks that have taken the time to put up a true mainstream site and exit to that. One of my submitters uses a personal blog kind of site...he's into music

Originally Posted by Itchy

I added one more gallery page and 2 more clips so now i should be in the 120 sec range +- a sec

Excellent

Originally Posted by Itchy

I changed the text on the banner areas so now they read a bit better

I don't see any blind links now...well done

A piece of advice on the banners...you'd probably be well served to remove the wildlittlesluts. Think about it...a surfer who sees that so obviously, could easily simply type it into the address bar and you just lost a sale

I know you were trying to make them non-blind. That can be done by using the site name, but not the url. So, it would just be Wild Little Sluts.

I still hate using little on porn sites...can't help myself. Really fucks me up on petite sites

Originally Posted by Itchy

Yes im playing more on the nicer site more people would link thats why no banner or link to sponsor on the index page.

Understandable, but not really necessary. If you build a quality site (which you have), you'll have no trouble getting listed. You'll find over time that the majority of free site sales do come from the index page. Don't waste that opportunity.

Take that big ass "WARNING MUST READ!!!" and slide one of your nice banners in there

You've still got warning text below it...use that big warning space above for a better purpose...making a sale

By the way...some of your banner gifs time out. I've got the site sitting in another window while typing this message...just noticed some of the gifs stopped animation. Not an accept/decline thing, but could have an effect on sales if you have a surfer who dozes off and wakes up horny or something

Originally Posted by Itchy

The clips get hotter as the days of the week go by lol
I just hated to waste a couple mins of video
So im looking at 10 sites out of this 20 min video

Ah, gotcha...just looked at the last two clips...they're a little better. Not sure what category you could submit the site to though. It's definitley not hardcore (your sponsor is though). Matching content on free sites to the paysite being promoted is a very good thing for sales. And submitting a free site to the right category is a very good thing for getting the site accepted.

Guess you could submit it to blondes...

Or, you could stay with teens. Many reviewers won't give you grief about the word little in the paysite title, I just don't happen to be one of them.

Originally Posted by Itchy

Thanks for looking and helping me out on a friday afternoonItchy

Glad to help

[johnnybg]

Originally Posted by Itchy

Yes im playing more on the nicer site more people would link
thats why no banner or link to sponsor on the index page.

I'm probably too late...

You see, if you follow the rules you have a good chance to be listed at each LL you submit to.

There is no need to have <3 sponsor links on your index page. Put all three of them in, you'll be amazed how many surfers don't even click on the ENTER link... You'll miss sales that way and won't get much more traffic from one or two extra listings.