Review please :)

MrYum · 2006-10-13, 12:23 AM

Good...glad I'm not all alone on the island

Yea, some paysites just push the boundaries too damn far...and that particular site would be a case in point

Arrival...again, I understand you're new so perhaps you just don't understand. Any site that pushes the envelope of age or consent is walking a very fine line that you probably don't want to walk. The text on those banners is way too close to the edge in my opinion.

That said, now that I've thrashed you over your choice of paysites...let's see if I can offer something constructive about your site

Adding to Majors comments...

Index page...
The paysite links on your site open new windows...that's an instant decline with most reviewers. You're not allowed to open any new windows on free sites. The only exception to this rule is your 2257 link...and even that is a toss up with some reviewers.

The rows/columns of letters...I'm assuming that's a holding space for recips. If so, that looks like a whole lot of recips. I'd suggest you keep it down to no more than 12 recips on the page to start out. Once you get more fluent in free sites, you can probably bump that number up a bit by using custom recips...but that's for later

Main page...
I don't see any technical problems here.

Galleries...
Technically, the galleries look okay too.

A couple things...I'm not going to comment on your text usage because some of it ties in with the paysite theme. I would however suggest that you brush up a bit on your english skills...as even the name of your site doesn't really make sense.

Also, as you're brushing up on those english skills...don't be afraid to put some juicy text on your pages. Get the surfer warmed up a bit...push his buttons...make him want to check out the sponsor site

Arrival · 2006-10-13, 03:01 AM

thrash: "Back to mainsite" added ;] (także podrawiam

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MrYum: Thank's for all advices!

Now i know that first thing that i should do is volume my english skills

and find another teen site to promote without any young-age-related promo banners.

Back to my test freesite

Paysite links are ok now - it was code pasted from sponsor page.

There is place for 16 recips but if it'll be better i can delete 4 of them

Doctype added

Text in my site is now copied from paysite because as you know i must still learn alot about juicy writing

Thank's again for all tips - i'll write when i pick another site to promote and correct freesite title

2006-10-13, 12:23 AM	#1
MrYum Arghhhh...submit yer sites ya ruddy swabs! Join Date: May 2004 Location: Sunny Florida! Posts: 5,108	Good...glad I'm not all alone on the island Yea, some paysites just push the boundaries too damn far...and that particular site would be a case in point Arrival...again, I understand you're new so perhaps you just don't understand. Any site that pushes the envelope of age or consent is walking a very fine line that you probably don't want to walk. The text on those banners is way too close to the edge in my opinion. That said, now that I've thrashed you over your choice of paysites...let's see if I can offer something constructive about your site Adding to Majors comments... Index page... The paysite links on your site open new windows...that's an instant decline with most reviewers. You're not allowed to open any new windows on free sites. The only exception to this rule is your 2257 link...and even that is a toss up with some reviewers. The rows/columns of letters...I'm assuming that's a holding space for recips. If so, that looks like a whole lot of recips. I'd suggest you keep it down to no more than 12 recips on the page to start out. Once you get more fluent in free sites, you can probably bump that number up a bit by using custom recips...but that's for later Main page... I don't see any technical problems here. Galleries... Technically, the galleries look okay too. A couple things...I'm not going to comment on your text usage because some of it ties in with the paysite theme. I would however suggest that you brush up a bit on your english skills...as even the name of your site doesn't really make sense. Also, as you're brushing up on those english skills...don't be afraid to put some juicy text on your pages. Get the surfer warmed up a bit...push his buttons...make him want to check out the sponsor site __________________ Porno Flixxx Submissions SOTI Site Submissions Free Porn Resource Submissions

2006-10-13, 03:01 AM	#2
Arrival Internet! Is that thing still around? Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 6	thrash: "Back to mainsite" added ;] (także podrawiam ) MrYum: Thank's for all advices! Now i know that first thing that i should do is volume my english skills and find another teen site to promote without any young-age-related promo banners. Back to my test freesite Paysite links are ok now - it was code pasted from sponsor page. There is place for 16 recips but if it'll be better i can delete 4 of them Doctype added Text in my site is now copied from paysite because as you know i must still learn alot about juicy writing Thank's again for all tips - i'll write when i pick another site to promote and correct freesite title