Please Review my 2nd FreeSite

iMan · 2006-10-22, 06:32 AM

Hey jonnydoe,

Nice looking site!
I got in to the free site submit game within the last few months it's a lot of fun

There are many things to get adjusted to and the best advice I can give is to, disagree if you want, but make the change

Or don't get listed... simple as that!
You might not get listed anyway... so what, keep building

At times, I've been doing summeolts, smashing my air guitar and thinking that the porno world is crazy and unfair.... it just got me dizzy, LOL!

So, looking at your site, and recognizing that yo have made an effort to make it look nice, my advice is this:

1) Your full size photos are too blury. If I had a LL I wouldn't list it because of that. Some of the sponsors I have are offering these kinds of photos and I can't see how thy are useful.
When I surf to a site, if I see crappy and unclear pics, I ain't signing up to the crappy provider of those crappy pics... maybe it's just me... or maybe not

2) The fact that the thums have a edge bevel effect makes them look a little more like ads than thumbs to me.. I don''t mind, it just flies at me like that.

3) You might wanna keep your code up to the w3c.org standards.
Whether you're using html or some other doctype. As of now, your pages are not valid.
http://validator.w3.org/

4) I suggest that, if you don't already know, learn how to do web design/layout "by hand" instead of relying on some software.
Andult or not, too many "professionals" rely on 3rd party apps to generate simple markup code... without KNOWING what it generates. I don't recommend it for any situation.

That's just the 2c I have... my first free site review

Good luck!

2006-10-22, 06:32 AM	#1
iMan Lord help me, I'm just not that bright Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 101	Hey jonnydoe, Nice looking site! I got in to the free site submit game within the last few months it's a lot of fun There are many things to get adjusted to and the best advice I can give is to, disagree if you want, but make the change Or don't get listed... simple as that! You might not get listed anyway... so what, keep building At times, I've been doing summeolts, smashing my air guitar and thinking that the porno world is crazy and unfair.... it just got me dizzy, LOL! So, looking at your site, and recognizing that yo have made an effort to make it look nice, my advice is this: 1) Your full size photos are too blury. If I had a LL I wouldn't list it because of that. Some of the sponsors I have are offering these kinds of photos and I can't see how thy are useful. When I surf to a site, if I see crappy and unclear pics, I ain't signing up to the crappy provider of those crappy pics... maybe it's just me... or maybe not 2) The fact that the thums have a edge bevel effect makes them look a little more like ads than thumbs to me.. I don''t mind, it just flies at me like that. 3) You might wanna keep your code up to the w3c.org standards. Whether you're using html or some other doctype. As of now, your pages are not valid. http://validator.w3.org/ 4) I suggest that, if you don't already know, learn how to do web design/layout "by hand" instead of relying on some software. Andult or not, too many "professionals" rely on 3rd party apps to generate simple markup code... without KNOWING what it generates. I don't recommend it for any situation. That's just the 2c I have... my first free site review Good luck! __________________