Plz review my free site

[Linkster]

The only things I see are you left in the "copy text here" stuff on one of the recips - as well as the recips being kinda disorganized - could do some work on just making them look a little better
That "contribution" text on the banner links doesnt make any sense? Maybe its something to do with a language barrier?

On gallery 1 three of the pics are basically the same pic - and things are kinda out of order on the pics between the two galleries - but again nothing big

[MrYum]

Hey there Cici

I was the big mean ass (my girlfriend calls me that ), that sent you here. If you're serious about doing free sites, this is the best place to learn

About your site:

Your whois info doesn't look right. Without going into details, I'd suggest you make sure your whois is valid and correct. It will be checked and if it's bogus, it will cost you listings.

Entry page...
The recip table looks pretty rough and was the first thing that prompted my suggestion that you come to GG&J.

Main page...
This is what's called a blind link;
"CLICK HERE TO SEE MORE ASIAN CUTIES"

Here's an excellent thread on blind links and how to avoid them;

http://www.greenguysboard.com/board/...ad.php?t=23441

Gallery one...
Another blind link...
"CLICK HERE TO SEE MORE ASIAN CUTIES"

This is something that will vary by link list owner, but it's a definite no go with me. The banner on the bottom right of this gallery states 'Thai Erotic V1rg1n Girl'. Personally, I don't think there's any place for v1rg1ns on porn sites.

Gallery two...
Same blind link on the right of the gallery.

And yea, no idea what context 'contribution' is being used in on that bottom link.

That's all I got

Now, all that said...this is actually a pretty damn nice site. With a bit of tweaking, you'll be well on your way

[cici]

Hello MrYum,

Originally Posted by MrYum

Hey there Cici

I was the big mean ass (my girlfriend calls me that ), that sent you here. If you're serious about doing free sites, this is the best place to learn

Thanks for the link, it's was one of my first free site and I have a lot of things to learn to build a good one. This board is a gold mine to make perfect freesites that convert

Originally Posted by MrYum

About your site:

Your whois info doesn't look right. Without going into details, I'd suggest you make sure your whois is valid and correct. It will be checked and if it's bogus, it will cost you listings.

Yes It's important to be a trusty partner.

Originally Posted by MrYum

Entry page...
The recip table looks pretty rough and was the first thing that prompted my suggestion that you come to GG&J.

Main page...
This is what's called a blind link;
"CLICK HERE TO SEE MORE ASIAN CUTIES"

Here's an excellent thread on blind links and how to avoid them;

http://www.greenguysboard.com/board/...ad.php?t=23441

Gallery one...
Another blind link...
"CLICK HERE TO SEE MORE ASIAN CUTIES"

This is something that will vary by link list owner, but it's a definite no go with me. The banner on the bottom right of this gallery states 'Thai Erotic V1rg1n Girl'. Personally, I don't think there's any place for v1rg1ns on porn sites.

Gallery two...
Same blind link on the right of the gallery.

And yea, no idea what context 'contribution' is being used in on that bottom link.

That's all I got

Very constructive report will correct all theses stuffs.

Originally Posted by MrYum

Now, all that said...this is actually a pretty damn nice site. With a bit of tweaking, you'll be well on your way

Thanks

[MrYum]

Glad to help Cici

[cici]

Originally Posted by Linkster

The only things I see are you left in the "copy text here" stuff on one of the recips - as well as the recips being kinda disorganized - could do some work on just making them look a little better
That "contribution" text on the banner links doesnt make any sense? Maybe its something to do with a language barrier?

On gallery 1 three of the pics are basically the same pic - and things are kinda out of order on the pics between the two galleries - but again nothing big

Thanks Linkster, I keep the order of the picture set according from the content provider I bought it, as I thought it was chronological :/