Poor Grammar or Spelling Errors

emilxm · 2007-02-01, 02:46 PM

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and this massage show me "Poor Grammar or Spelling Errors"
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can you help me what to i do for fixing this problem
my grammar not so good

Cleo · 2007-02-01, 03:00 PM

Start doing porn in your native language instead of English.

ladydesigner · 2007-02-01, 04:30 PM

You probably should get a better grasp of the English language. One of the things that really irritates me these days is free sites I review that are written in broken or confusing English. I understand that English isn't everyones first language and that's fine but you shouldn't be making sites targeting English speaking porn surfers if you can't speak it clearly yourself.

emilxm · 2007-02-01, 09:45 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Cleo

Start doing porn in your native language instead of English.

I did not work with free site before this is my first probe
In future i will write good and carefully so dont be bad

i hope so that is my grammar good in this post

Greenguy · 2007-02-01, 09:55 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by emilxm

...i hope so that is my grammar good in this post

Dear Sir/Madam,

Your grasp of the English language is not that good. We suggest that you take a class at your local university so that you can learn how to speak proper English. Once you have accomplished this task, please feel free to return to the board and we will be more than willing to help you.

Sincerely,
Greenguy

ponygirl · 2007-02-01, 10:06 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Greenie

Dear Sir/Madam,

Your grasp of the English language is not that good. We suggest that you take a class at your local university so that you can learn how to speak proper English. Once you have accomplished this task, please feel free to return to the board and we will be more than willing to help you.

Sincerely,
Greenguy

I wondered when this would show up

seriously, if your english isn't very good it doesn't mean you can't make freesites. Just stay away from large paragraphs of text and use text from the paysite tour (although sometimes that's just as bad lol). I don't mind the odd spelling error, it's those huge blocks of text that leave your head spinning that I don't care for

There's lots of people here that don't speak english very well and they do just fine

Cleo · 2007-02-01, 05:04 PM

I've been deleting submitter's accounts that keep on submitting sites that have badly written English in their titles and/or descriptions.

JackDaniel's · 2007-02-01, 05:26 PM

Hi emilxm,

English isn't my first language either and I know that sometimes my writing may contain misspelled words, but I'm always doing my best to speak and write correctly.

Sometimes I don't write words correctly, because I've seen them spelled wrong by other users

Even if I'd write them correctly I still feel uncertain all the time!

There are many ways to improve your English speaking skills : ebooks, online dictionaries (dictionary.com is one I use frequently)!

MrYum · 2007-02-01, 05:31 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by JackDaniel's

Hi emilxm,

English isn't my first language either and I know that sometimes my writing may contain misspelled words, but I'm always doing my best to speak and write correctly.

Sometimes I don't write words correctly, because I've seen them spelled wrong by other users

Even if I'd write them correctly I still feel uncertain all the time!

There are many ways to improve your English speaking skills : ebooks, online dictionaries (dictionary.com is one I use frequently)!

And yours are damn fine

It is however staggering how many sites get submitted that have abysmal engrish. That simply cannot be good for selling to an predominantly english speaking target market.

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emilxm · 2007-02-01, 08:25 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Arafura

Hi emilxm,
Your page made my editing fingers itch! Below are some suggestions I hope you find helpful. If you'd like any more editing or English help, message me.

Good luck!

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Xallow · 2007-02-02, 12:10 AM

A good and fun way of learning english is playing a lot of online games, it is time consuming, but when looking at all my younger cousins and their english language skills, it is clear that the ones that play a lot of online games that require them to speak english to communicate with their fellow players are FAR superior at english than the ones that have no interest in playing computer games. I am not saying it is the best way to learn, taking classes would definately be more effective I think, but not as much fun.

Jim · 2007-02-02, 04:27 AM

I had a thieving friend that could speak perfect English but when it came to writing it, he sucked. He ended up using a good grammar checker and things worked out much better. He was even able to build Ultrateen checking his work with Word.

emilxm · 2007-02-02, 06:12 PM

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Wiggles · 2007-02-03, 08:30 AM

i'm sure if you asked someone to proof read your stuff they would do it, maybe post on a board, usually there isn't a large amount of sales text, wouldn't take someone very long to fix it for you.

2007-02-01, 02:46 PM	#1
emilxm If something goes wrong at the plant, blame the guy who can't speak English Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 36	Poor Grammar or Spelling Errors hello i submit site Busty Brunette Banged and this massage show me "Poor Grammar or Spelling Errors" this is url http://www.vip-porns.com/bigtit/index.html can you help me what to i do for fixing this problem my grammar not so good

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2007-02-01, 05:26 PM	#8
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2007-02-01, 06:29 PM	#10
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2007-02-03, 08:30 AM	#15
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