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2007-03-07, 08:10 PM
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It's the end of the world as we know it, and I feel fine
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: Canada
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My main critique is the B&W photography, maybe my surfers are less subtle and artistic minded than some others, but I'm sure they are looking for porn, and that site doesn't promise porn. Subtlety misses the point more often than not.
Less art, more smut (in a teasing sort of way) would be my suggestion. Let 'em know it's not an art gallery, but something they can whack off too.
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2007-03-07, 09:12 PM
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Nothing funnier than the ridiculous faces you people make mid-coitus
Join Date: Aug 2003
Location: Sin-City USA
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Some may disagree.. but you want to close off your 'traffic leaks" so i'd lose the exit link.. like google needs more clicks.. if your surfers don't like it.. and you have NO traps set.. i'm sure they'd be able to just back out..
and what all those above said. |
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2007-03-08, 08:55 AM
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Certified Nice Person
Join Date: Oct 2003
Location: Dirty Undies, NY
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I see where you are going with this free site, using the excessively clean and minimalistic aesthetic as the paysite's tour. However, if there is one thing I'd change, it would be the increase in the amount of sales text.
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2007-03-08, 12:11 PM
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Aw, Dad, you've done a lot of great things, but you're a very old man, and old people are useless
Join Date: Oct 2006
Posts: 27
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Thanks guys, for all the great feedback, we are going to go back to the drawing board and make the tweaks and definitely Increase the sales text,
Please keep the suggestion coming! Regards |
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