Someone can help me with grammar?

[secretagentwilly]

Here's a stab at it:

"Sweet Teenie take a big cock. Dorothy's not in Oz no more and she doesn't have her magic shoes. She sucks and fucks hoping to get back home. She does it all, she even gets her ass fucked. Come in and see if she earns her way home."

good luck...

[Useless]

Originally Posted by easymama

Here's a stab at it:

"Sweet Teenie take a big cock. Dorothy's not in Oz no more and she doesn't have her magic shoes. She sucks and fucks hoping to get back home. She does it all, she even gets her ass fucked. Come in and see if she earns her way home."

That's not much better.

jgaraza, unless you intend on coming here and having the board rewrite your text for each site you build, you are going to have copy it from your sponsor. Of course, the sponsors tend not be the brightest bulbs in the box either. So their text may be deficient in the same manner as yours.

Also, don't use characters from children's movies on porn sites. I don't care how well written that text is or isn't. I'd reject it for the Oz references.

[LowryBigwood]

Originally Posted by Useless Warrior

Also, don't use characters from children's movies on porn sites. I don't care how well written that text is or isn't. I'd reject it for the Oz references.

Exactly right Useless. Jgar, how many people searching for the wizard of oz terms want to land on a porn page? I am betting a big fat ZERO. You are not going to get listed at very many places at all with that crap.