My First Site - let me know what you think

[Beaver Bob]

Originally Posted by Hankphone

Ok, I've made a new page. Please let me know if I am on the right track this time before I submit it. Thanks! Rippling Black Booty

thats much better. only suggestion I would add, use more text and less graphics but thats more of a personal preference of mine. its better for the search engines and all that. it looks nice and clean and seems to follow general LL rules.