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Originally Posted by spacemanspiff

What about doing a story site with a few of the sponsor's softcore teaser pics embedded in the abbreviated version that you submit to the linklists, with your 'click here for more" going to the rest of the story on it's own page with more hardcore sponsors pics, but still not to hard, and links to that sponsor's site using text like "see the rest of the pics/movies here?

That is mostly what I was thinking. The stories are currently around 500 words. The real versions of all of them are way longer. Some of them up to 20 pages long. I should check word count sometime.

I removed the toy ad because toys are not stories. I am going to change the first story to something a bit more exciting. Men will just leave if the first story is bad. Women normally take a peek at the second story before they bail.

I am thinking more text around the banners telling people that the sponsors are naturally, the best sponsors ever to exist.

The full versions of the stories will appear on erotictymes in a day or two. The idea being that on the free site, I tempt them with more story sponsors. If they read the full version then, I can tempt them with something that matches the story ie a spanking sponsor for a spanking story.

That way, we have the if you love reading stories, this sponsor has 100s more for you to read and we have the if you loved the spanking story, this sponsor has all spanking, all the time


I will try illustrated stories for the next free site. Then we can decide if it works better to have the "see the rest of the pics/movies here" works best with a direct link to the sponsor's site or perhaps to their fhg.