Take a look at my site - critique please!

[DonAntonio]

Originally Posted by Xallow

The hub looks ok to me, only had a quick look at it, but it looks fine.

Both the latest free sites you put in here have similar problems.

1. The sites don't have a title, when submitting to link lists you have to give a title and that title has to be visible somewhere on your warning page.

2. On both warning pages You have blind links to the sponsor. When linking to a sponsor on a free site it has to be apparent to the surfer that he is leaving your site to go to that particular site you arelinking too.

3. on Your main and gallery pages You have 4 outgoing links, 3 to the sponsor and 1 to Your hub, the hub link counts as an outgoing aswell.

I am assuming that the versions you put up here are clean versions and you have other versions with recips.

Other than those things they look ok to me.

1. Thanks, I didn't know that the title has to be on the warning page
2. I thought it's obvious that when the surfer clicks somewhere else then "enter" he is leaving my site. Anyway I will change the links.
3. I'll make sure to change that

Of course, I use Chameleon submitter, and these are the clean pages.

Thanks a lot for all the tips, it's great to have someone experience to ask for advice.

[SheepGuy]

Originally Posted by DonAntonio

Of course, I use Chameleon submitter, and these are the clean pages.

That will get you declined most places. Auto submitting is a no-no with most LL's.