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Old 2008-07-10, 10:12 PM   #1
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You have a good looking site. I have 2 recommendations for you.

1. Do a spell check on your ad copy. Typos make you look unprofessional.

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Members get exclusive access to our girls exclussive high-quality content, their bios, and links to their special intrest pages.
Do you really want to use the word exclusive right after you just used it?

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2. If you want to encourage people to click your links, increase the contrast of the blue text links against the black background, which will make them stand out more.
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Old 2008-07-11, 10:27 AM   #2
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Well done site. Wonder if most members will be in Colorado. Seems the content would have its highest appeal there.
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Old 2008-07-12, 10:37 PM   #3
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Well done site. Wonder if most members will be in Colorado. Seems the content would have its highest appeal there.
A high percentage of our members on Glass Mannequin are from Colorado and I'm sure this one will be no different. Partly because because I target this market and partly because our models do a decent job of promoting the program.
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Old 2008-07-14, 04:32 AM   #4
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Good luck with it.
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Old 2008-07-12, 10:34 PM   #5
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You have a good looking site. I have 2 recommendations for you.

1. Do a spell check on your ad copy. Typos make you look unprofessional.


Do you really want to use the word exclusive right after you just used it?

2. If you want to encourage people to click your links, increase the contrast of the blue text links against the black background, which will make them stand out more.
Thanks for the feedback - I just got in from Vegas and I'll look it over again with a fine tooth comb as soon as I get some rest.

I had planned to fix the color of the a-links but just couldn't get to everything before I left for Vegas.

We did get CCBill approval and we're waiting on VISA approval at this time.
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