Tell me what you think?

[Toby]

Not bad really. I'd make the thumbs larger. 140x210 would make a row of five about the same width as the banners.

The last line of text isn't bad, but the two lines of MEMBERSHIP REQUIRED are rather passive. I'd change them to something that is more of a call to action and expresses some sense of urgency. For example, add the word NOW! after CLICK HERE on the line at the bottom. Two more similar lines of sales text to replace the passive ones and you're set.

[DPTKID]

Originally Posted by Toby

Not bad really. I'd make the thumbs larger. 140x210 would make a row of five about the same width as the banners.

The last line of text isn't bad, but the two lines of MEMBERSHIP REQUIRED are rather passive. I'd change them to something that is more of a call to action and expresses some sense of urgency. For example, add the word NOW! after CLICK HERE on the line at the bottom. Two more similar lines of sales text to replace the passive ones and you're set.

Thanks for checking it out, I did change the membership required but Idk how much better these will be. Yeah now that I think about it they were rather "passive", I guess I will eventually pick up on this better as time and practice goes on. Also, I tried to make them larger but how do I do that because not all the photos are the same size and even when I tried to resize them they seemed to be bigger/wider then others. So I just took it like that off the hosted gallery as is.