The "What Are You Working On?" Thread - Week Ending May 17th 2014

ecchi · 2014-06-15, 04:19 PM

Added another page to my teen sex blog. This is another page updated from the old site called Teen Masturbation & Teen Fisting and boy is it shit! The main problem is that I was trying too hard to include keywords when I first wrote it (".....But even if the girth was the same, teen masturbation is not as good as a real teen fuck....As the teenage girls masturbation continued she wanted so much more inside her pussy. Slowly she slid her whole hand inside herself so that it was no longer just teen masturbation, it was teen fisting. The middle age man looked on delighted. This was the best free teen sex show he had ever seen. Hell it was the only free teen sex show he had ever seen...."). However, even allowing for that it was still shit, I don't know how I have the nerve to call myself a writer.

The worst, I think, was my description of the teenage girls orgasm ""She now knew the meaning of 'feeling the earth moved', it not only felt like an earthquake, it also felt like a building was falling on top of her, but in slow motion" I've never had a building fall on me, but I bet it hurts loads. And if a woman's orgasm really felt like that I doubt if any woman would ever have sex again!

If this website ever goes viral, I think I'm in with a chance of deposing "Fifty Shades Of Grey" from the top spot in the "Worst Porn Litrature Ever" award.

So now is probably not a good time to try and sell you a copy of my latest book!

2014-06-15, 04:19 PM	#12
ecchi Banned Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: About to be evicted!!!! Posts: 4,082	Added another page to my teen sex blog. This is another page updated from the old site called Teen Masturbation & Teen Fisting and boy is it shit! The main problem is that I was trying too hard to include keywords when I first wrote it (".....But even if the girth was the same, teen masturbation is not as good as a real teen fuck....As the teenage girls masturbation continued she wanted so much more inside her pussy. Slowly she slid her whole hand inside herself so that it was no longer just teen masturbation, it was teen fisting. The middle age man looked on delighted. This was the best free teen sex show he had ever seen. Hell it was the only free teen sex show he had ever seen...."). However, even allowing for that it was still shit, I don't know how I have the nerve to call myself a writer. The worst, I think, was my description of the teenage girls orgasm ""She now knew the meaning of 'feeling the earth moved', it not only felt like an earthquake, it also felt like a building was falling on top of her, but in slow motion" I've never had a building fall on me, but I bet it hurts loads. And if a woman's orgasm really felt like that I doubt if any woman would ever have sex again! If this website ever goes viral, I think I'm in with a chance of deposing "Fifty Shades Of Grey" from the top spot in the "Worst Porn Litrature Ever" award. So now is probably not a good time to try and sell you a copy of my latest book!