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backoffbitch · 2004-06-18, 11:12 PM

Lemme add a few cpmments on

Good site, but I got a few improvement ideas that will help make the site more readable and more likely to get decent listings. The site tittle might upset a few reviewers, the word 'teenies' is getting more difficult to use and rightfully so (just my opinion). As Chop mentioned above, why not center the text? Also, on the main page, the link paragraph is very hard to read against your background color. The text size is too small to even read that's attached to the top of each preview thumb on that page as well. Some link lists dont like seeing paragraph text links. Might wanna break it up a bit.

The link list owner of Mega Porn Links might not like his link color either on the warning page. Can't even see it.

Your main and gallery pages would benefit from having the site title left on them. Try to keep background colors neutral as possible and use the same background throuout the entire site.

On the first gallery I would attach "Get more hot teens pictures and movies now!" to the lower banner and move teh banner where teh trext is now.

I would also add "Hot teen girl shows her firm body!
Wanna see more of this hot chick?" above the banner.

greenguy beat me to the thing about the spaces in the url.

Same principle for the second gallery.

Good job otherwise, you should see how bad my first one was... i'm shocked it made any sales. file://localhost/d:/web/back-off-bitch.net/gal/girlfuckguy/carandysob/index.htm

Good luck and keep it up. You are on the right track

2004-06-18, 11:12 PM	#1
backoffbitch No matter how good you are at something, there's always about a million people better than you Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: New Brunswick Posts: 234	Lemme add a few cpmments on Good site, but I got a few improvement ideas that will help make the site more readable and more likely to get decent listings. The site tittle might upset a few reviewers, the word 'teenies' is getting more difficult to use and rightfully so (just my opinion). As Chop mentioned above, why not center the text? Also, on the main page, the link paragraph is very hard to read against your background color. The text size is too small to even read that's attached to the top of each preview thumb on that page as well. Some link lists dont like seeing paragraph text links. Might wanna break it up a bit. The link list owner of Mega Porn Links might not like his link color either on the warning page. Can't even see it. Your main and gallery pages would benefit from having the site title left on them. Try to keep background colors neutral as possible and use the same background throuout the entire site. On the first gallery I would attach "Get more hot teens pictures and movies now!" to the lower banner and move teh banner where teh trext is now. I would also add "Hot teen girl shows her firm body! Wanna see more of this hot chick?" above the banner. greenguy beat me to the thing about the spaces in the url. Same principle for the second gallery. Good job otherwise, you should see how bad my first one was... i'm shocked it made any sales. file://localhost/d:/web/back-off-bitch.net/gal/girlfuckguy/carandysob/index.htm Good luck and keep it up. You are on the right track __________________ I'm hot behaving badly.