Newbie freesite asking for his first review

[SmithsMedia]

Originally posted by leedogg
Hey guys

I've been lurking around for a little while and had decided to jump into doing a bit of freesite building. Please take a look at my first effort >> RIGHT HERE and let me know what you think.

Please be as blunt as you need to be....

Some things I am particularly interested in:

a) I noticed in a few threads a limit of 3 links per page - does this include the index / entry page - some sites I have seen have more like 5

b) Are there any benefits me having the link to gallery 2 from gallery 1 and back again? Or shoudl i be wanting my surfer to click back to see the ads on the "main" page again?

c) Am I too soft in my marketing? Should I get a little tougher?

Anywayz - before I become a novelist I'll stop right here - remember be blunt - I'd rather have my feelings hurt and learn something!

Thanks in advance - and thanks to all those posters and resposnders I have taken notes from when building my first free site!

Leedogg |afro|

Well LeeDogg Ilike your site, it loaded well and I foundmy round it without any issues at all - I liked your content and if this ended in my inbox I would list your work and put in on show for the public