please review

HonestMichael · 2004-09-01, 11:28 AM

hy, all!
..as i´m pretty much a noob, could you please have a look at this freesite and tell me your opinions?
http://www.tangatanga.de/footfetish1...noverhere.html

thanxx.

HonestMichael · 2004-09-12, 06:08 PM

@greenguy:
a hundred'n somethin views and no reply, could you please close this thread?

and yep, i see i've probably posted this into the wrong category, sorry for that.

Kezza · 2004-09-12, 07:26 PM

Hello Michael

Not sure why you havent received any replies, but I do think you posted in the correct forum.

Just a couple of quick points about your site:

1. on your warning and Main page the layout is off to the right Try and center is so it looks a bit more appealling. And you could perhaps make better use of the entire screen

2. In your galleries - they scroll on an 800x600 layout. This would be rejected by many Link lists.

3. Your site title sounds more like a description.

Hope this helps. I am sure others will add more constructive comments for you

Kezza

HonestMichael · 2004-09-12, 07:49 PM

thanks, kezza!!!
..now i'll go and fix that

MadMax · 2004-09-13, 12:45 AM

I agree with Kezza. To add a couple notes:

You should move your title to the top of the warning page.

That big square graphic is taking up a lot of real estate on all your pages for something that isn't linked to anything. It pulls attention away from your ads/pics and doesn't give you anything in return.

The site needs to be cleaned up a bit, but it's not bad for an early attempt. Keep at it, and try going to some of the link lists that you want to list you and looking at a bunch of other sites to get a feel for what's out there. Being different is a great thing, but as a noob you can learn a lot from others just by looking at what they're doing.

Keep it up!

Greenguy · 2004-09-13, 08:37 AM

Sorry about that HonestMichael - I do usually reply to these but I must've missed it

Kezza & MadMax are pointing you in the right direction

2004-09-01, 11:28 AM	#1
HonestMichael Rock stars ... is there anything they don't know? Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Hannover, Germany Posts: 13	please review hy, all! ..as i´m pretty much a noob, could you please have a look at this freesite and tell me your opinions? http://www.tangatanga.de/footfetish1...noverhere.html thanxx.

2004-09-12, 07:26 PM	#3
Kezza 24 hours in a day, 24 beers in a case. Coincidence? I think NOT! Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Australia Posts: 559	Hello Michael Not sure why you havent received any replies, but I do think you posted in the correct forum. Just a couple of quick points about your site: 1. on your warning and Main page the layout is off to the right Try and center is so it looks a bit more appealling. And you could perhaps make better use of the entire screen 2. In your galleries - they scroll on an 800x600 layout. This would be rejected by many Link lists. 3. Your site title sounds more like a description. Hope this helps. I am sure others will add more constructive comments for you Kezza __________________ Kezza Now This IS Groovy Free Porn

2004-09-13, 12:45 AM	#5
MadMax "Without evil there can be no good, so it must be good to be evil sometimes" ~ Satan Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Motor City, baby, where carjacking was invented! Now GIMME THOSE SHOES! Posts: 2,385	I agree with Kezza. To add a couple notes: You should move your title to the top of the warning page. That big square graphic is taking up a lot of real estate on all your pages for something that isn't linked to anything. It pulls attention away from your ads/pics and doesn't give you anything in return. The site needs to be cleaned up a bit, but it's not bad for an early attempt. Keep at it, and try going to some of the link lists that you want to list you and looking at a bunch of other sites to get a feel for what's out there. Being different is a great thing, but as a noob you can learn a lot from others just by looking at what they're doing. Keep it up! Last edited by MadMax; 2004-09-13 at 12:47 AM..

2004-09-13, 08:37 AM	#6
Greenguy The Original Greenguy (Est'd 1996) & AVN HOF Member - I Crop Pics For Thumbs In My Sleep Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Blasdell, NY (shithole suburb south of Buffalo) Posts: 41,929	Sorry about that HonestMichael - I do usually reply to these but I must've missed it Kezza & MadMax are pointing you in the right direction __________________ Promote POV Porn Cash By Building & Submitting Galleries to the Porn Luv Network

2004-09-12, 06:08 PM	#2
HonestMichael Rock stars ... is there anything they don't know? Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Hannover, Germany Posts: 13	@greenguy: a hundred'n somethin views and no reply, could you please close this thread? and yep, i see i've probably posted this into the wrong category, sorry for that.

2004-09-12, 07:49 PM	#4
HonestMichael Rock stars ... is there anything they don't know? Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Hannover, Germany Posts: 13	thanks, kezza!!! ..now i'll go and fix that