please review

MadMax · 2004-09-13, 12:45 AM

I agree with Kezza. To add a couple notes:

You should move your title to the top of the warning page.

That big square graphic is taking up a lot of real estate on all your pages for something that isn't linked to anything. It pulls attention away from your ads/pics and doesn't give you anything in return.

The site needs to be cleaned up a bit, but it's not bad for an early attempt. Keep at it, and try going to some of the link lists that you want to list you and looking at a bunch of other sites to get a feel for what's out there. Being different is a great thing, but as a noob you can learn a lot from others just by looking at what they're doing.

Keep it up!

2004-09-13, 12:45 AM	#1
MadMax "Without evil there can be no good, so it must be good to be evil sometimes" ~ Satan Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Motor City, baby, where carjacking was invented! Now GIMME THOSE SHOES! Posts: 2,385	I agree with Kezza. To add a couple notes: You should move your title to the top of the warning page. That big square graphic is taking up a lot of real estate on all your pages for something that isn't linked to anything. It pulls attention away from your ads/pics and doesn't give you anything in return. The site needs to be cleaned up a bit, but it's not bad for an early attempt. Keep at it, and try going to some of the link lists that you want to list you and looking at a bunch of other sites to get a feel for what's out there. Being different is a great thing, but as a noob you can learn a lot from others just by looking at what they're doing. Keep it up! Last edited by MadMax; 2004-09-13 at 12:47 AM..