Getting linked

sketch · 2004-09-13, 10:39 PM

Hi Folks,

Two sites I've submitted several times (after various corrections) are still not getting linked.

Anyone care to review:

http://amateurlists.com/anal/sites/anal-chicks-fucked/
http://amateurlists.com/anal/sites/blonde-anal-glory/

I can't find anything else wrong with these two sites.

Thanks for your time!
Sketch

DangerDave · 2004-09-13, 11:49 PM

sketch,

http://amateurlists.com/anal/sites/anal-chicks-fucked/

1 - "Free pics" is not the title of your site.. so why is it at the top?

2 - The first link to Siccash is blind.

That would stop the reviewer in their tracks..

Same for

http://amateurlists.com/anal/sites/blonde-anal-glory/

DD

sketch · 2004-09-14, 12:03 AM

Hi DD,

Thanks for the feedback. Free Pics should be free pics: title here.

As for the blind link... being relatively new to this I'm looking for the definition of "blind". The leading paragraph clearly states what the surfer will see when they click the link... What is deceptive about this? "Click here for videos", and on the next page they see on topic videos.

I'm lost

Thanks again for your feedback, any assistance would be greatly appreciated!

Sketch

finnbear · 2004-09-14, 12:28 AM

Well, I'm not LL owner but that link IMHO tells surfers that they see anal sex videos for free.

Sponsor link must be sponsor link and surfers must see that if they click they must join and pay to see the stuff.

I didn't clicked the link but if there is free sample clips you can promote them like "Click Here to see free anal video clips at Anysitename Here". That is not a blind link, I presume.

sketch · 2004-09-14, 12:48 AM

Hey Finnbear,

That's precisely the message, and it delivers. The next page has several samples clips that depict anal sex, free.

I did heed your advice and specified the site name "See vids of this at Ass Then Mouth". I wouldn't think this is a blind link, but thanks for all the suggestions.

I'll let a couple more people peer over these before I submit them again, no sense in wasting everyones time

Thanks again,
Sketch

Greenguy · 2004-09-14, 08:51 AM

Also, none of the pages fit on an 800 wide monitor

MadMax · 2004-09-14, 10:14 AM

DD & GG have pretty much summed it up. Fix those problems and I'd be willing to list the sites. The warning I'll give you is that they're two sites with pretty much exactly the same template, the only differences being some really minor color changes. If I saw both sites submitted at the same time that would make me wary. You give more than the 20 pic minimum, which is good so I might make an exception, but you REALLY need to keep your pages from scrolling horizontally on 800x600. Keep your table widths to 750 and you shouldn't have a problem there.

You really should use different templates if you're submitting multiple sites at the same time, and any template a reviewer sees more than twice in a couple months is likely to start getting bounced for that reason. You've also got some typos in your sales text, which should be corrected, i.e. "vioalted" and "viedos." While this might not give you a problem on its own, it can be the "last nail in the coffin" so to speak.

Clean them up and I'd list them as long as they're going in different categories (i.e. one in Anal and one in Blondes). If you wanted them both in Anal you'd need two different page layouts/sets of colors. HTH.

sketch · 2004-09-14, 10:20 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Greenguy
Also, none of the pages fit on an 800 wide monitor

Thanks, this is now corrected and noted for future reference. My primary browser is Firefox, and that 750 table fit pefect, however in IE there was a 2px horizontal scroll (yuck!).

All fixed now.

sketch · 2004-09-14, 10:23 PM

Thanks madmax. Spelling errors corrected - that's what happens when your mind moves faster then your fingers and you wear 3 inch glasses!

Thanks for the note about tempaltes, I'm working on other site designs now, these were my third and fourth sites

You guys were all a big help!

Thanks!|afro|

|afro|

sketch · 2004-09-17, 05:21 PM

Hrm. Even with all those changes the sites still didn't get listed.

Maybe it's a content/layout thing.

Ah well, try try again

Thanks everyone.

2004-09-13, 10:39 PM	#1
sketch Internet! Is that thing still around? Join Date: Sep 2004 Posts: 6	Getting linked Hi Folks, Two sites I've submitted several times (after various corrections) are still not getting linked. Anyone care to review: http://amateurlists.com/anal/sites/anal-chicks-fucked/ http://amateurlists.com/anal/sites/blonde-anal-glory/ I can't find anything else wrong with these two sites. Thanks for your time! Sketch Last edited by sketch; 2004-09-13 at 10:43 PM..

2004-09-13, 11:49 PM	#2
DangerDave Bonged Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: BrisVegas, AUSTRALIA Posts: 4,882	sketch, http://amateurlists.com/anal/sites/anal-chicks-fucked/ 1 - "Free pics" is not the title of your site.. so why is it at the top? 2 - The first link to Siccash is blind. That would stop the reviewer in their tracks.. Same for http://amateurlists.com/anal/sites/blonde-anal-glory/ DD __________________ Old Dollars >>>> Now with over 90 Hosted Free Sites <<<< DangerDave.com.au - Adult Links to Free Porn

2004-09-14, 12:28 AM	#4
finnbear You can now put whatever you want in this space :) Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Finland Posts: 534	Well, I'm not LL owner but that link IMHO tells surfers that they see anal sex videos for free. Sponsor link must be sponsor link and surfers must see that if they click they must join and pay to see the stuff. I didn't clicked the link but if there is free sample clips you can promote them like "Click Here to see free anal video clips at Anysitename Here". That is not a blind link, I presume. __________________ My free porn sites

2004-09-14, 08:51 AM	#6
Greenguy The Original Greenguy (Est'd 1996) & AVN HOF Member - I Crop Pics For Thumbs In My Sleep Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Blasdell, NY (shithole suburb south of Buffalo) Posts: 41,929	Also, none of the pages fit on an 800 wide monitor __________________ Promote POV Porn Cash By Building & Submitting Galleries to the Porn Luv Network

2004-09-14, 10:23 PM	#9
sketch Internet! Is that thing still around? Join Date: Sep 2004 Posts: 6	Thanks madmax. Spelling errors corrected - that's what happens when your mind moves faster then your fingers and you wear 3 inch glasses! Thanks for the note about tempaltes, I'm working on other site designs now, these were my third and fourth sites You guys were all a big help! Thanks!\|afro\| \|afro\| \|afro\| \|afro\|

2004-09-14, 12:03 AM	#3
sketch Internet! Is that thing still around? Join Date: Sep 2004 Posts: 6	Hi DD, Thanks for the feedback. Free Pics should be free pics: title here. As for the blind link... being relatively new to this I'm looking for the definition of "blind". The leading paragraph clearly states what the surfer will see when they click the link... What is deceptive about this? "Click here for videos", and on the next page they see on topic videos. I'm lost Thanks again for your feedback, any assistance would be greatly appreciated! Sketch

2004-09-14, 12:48 AM	#5
sketch Internet! Is that thing still around? Join Date: Sep 2004 Posts: 6	Hey Finnbear, That's precisely the message, and it delivers. The next page has several samples clips that depict anal sex, free. I did heed your advice and specified the site name "See vids of this at Ass Then Mouth". I wouldn't think this is a blind link, but thanks for all the suggestions. I'll let a couple more people peer over these before I submit them again, no sense in wasting everyones time Thanks again, Sketch

2004-09-14, 10:14 AM	#7
MadMax "Without evil there can be no good, so it must be good to be evil sometimes" ~ Satan Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Motor City, baby, where carjacking was invented! Now GIMME THOSE SHOES! Posts: 2,385	DD & GG have pretty much summed it up. Fix those problems and I'd be willing to list the sites. The warning I'll give you is that they're two sites with pretty much exactly the same template, the only differences being some really minor color changes. If I saw both sites submitted at the same time that would make me wary. You give more than the 20 pic minimum, which is good so I might make an exception, but you REALLY need to keep your pages from scrolling horizontally on 800x600. Keep your table widths to 750 and you shouldn't have a problem there. You really should use different templates if you're submitting multiple sites at the same time, and any template a reviewer sees more than twice in a couple months is likely to start getting bounced for that reason. You've also got some typos in your sales text, which should be corrected, i.e. "vioalted" and "viedos." While this might not give you a problem on its own, it can be the "last nail in the coffin" so to speak. Clean them up and I'd list them as long as they're going in different categories (i.e. one in Anal and one in Blondes). If you wanted them both in Anal you'd need two different page layouts/sets of colors. HTH.

2004-09-17, 05:21 PM	#10
sketch Internet! Is that thing still around? Join Date: Sep 2004 Posts: 6	Hrm. Even with all those changes the sites still didn't get listed. Maybe it's a content/layout thing. Ah well, try try again Thanks everyone.