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Useless · 2004-10-29, 05:25 PM

The recips for Greeny and Smut Gremlins look huge for some odd reason. You have a site entitled 'Blonde Girl 3Some', but you have a banner for and Asian site on your index.

I'm doubting that an add with a box of tissues is going to sell memberships. That's a tad freaky.

You are attempting to market 'Intimate Playroom', 'FTV Girls', 'Intimate Playhouse', and 'Overcity Webhosting' all on the main page. This means that you are not effectively marketing any of them. Pick one and run with it.

You may also want to reconsider linking to anyone but Nasty Dollar's sites when using their content. They wouldn't be happy with that.

You just need to simplify the whole project. Pick one sponsor and link to them 2-3 times per free site page. Use text ads. Banner ads are excellent anchors for your own good sales text. Banners alone are crap.

2004-10-29, 05:25 PM	#6
Useless Certified Nice Person Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Dirty Undies, NY Posts: 11,268	The recips for Greeny and Smut Gremlins look huge for some odd reason. You have a site entitled 'Blonde Girl 3Some', but you have a banner for and Asian site on your index. I'm doubting that an add with a box of tissues is going to sell memberships. That's a tad freaky. You are attempting to market 'Intimate Playroom', 'FTV Girls', 'Intimate Playhouse', and 'Overcity Webhosting' all on the main page. This means that you are not effectively marketing any of them. Pick one and run with it. You may also want to reconsider linking to anyone but Nasty Dollar's sites when using their content. They wouldn't be happy with that. You just need to simplify the whole project. Pick one sponsor and link to them 2-3 times per free site page. Use text ads. Banner ads are excellent anchors for your own good sales text. Banners alone are crap. __________________ Click here to purchase a bridge I'm selling.