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2004-11-09, 08:13 AM | #1 |
A woman is like beer. They look good, they smell good, and you'd step over your own mother just to get one!
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Critique my freesites please...
Hi folks!
http://www.fetish-pleasures.com/treeboundslave-a/ http://www.fetish-pleasures.com/slaveboundtowall-a/ Please tell me what you guys think about them...especially sales text...cause English is not my first language... Thanks! |
2004-11-09, 08:57 AM | #2 |
You can now put whatever you want in this space :)
Join Date: Jun 2004
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site looks good to me.
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2004-11-09, 09:02 AM | #3 |
Former pr0n slinger.
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Sites look fine.
But be careful with that banner on the 2nd page of the 2nd site. Some reviewers might decline it because of that. Also change your template look from time to time |
2004-11-09, 11:19 AM | #4 |
Trying is the first step towards failure
Join Date: Sep 2003
Location: Norway
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looks fine but doesnt some LL owners have issues with masking the url like you do on sponsor links? Im not sure about this but I've read about it somewhere I think, could very well be wrong though
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2004-11-09, 11:26 AM | #5 |
Screw you, guys. I'm going home.
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Your sites look nice and I would definately list them..
If ask for spelling I guess it should be 'Speak for Themselves' instead of 'Speak for Themself' but english is not my primary lagnuage too so probably other could help |
2004-11-09, 12:15 PM | #6 |
"Without evil there can be no good, so it must be good to be evil sometimes" ~ Satan
Join Date: Aug 2004
Location: Motor City, baby, where carjacking was invented! Now GIMME THOSE SHOES!
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I listed them
As for masking sponsor URLs, most LL owners have no problem with mouseovers as long as you only use them to hide your ref code, i.e. you change www.sponsordomain.com/ref=your-ref-code to www.sponsordomain.com. As long as you still show the surfer what site the link points to most people won't mind. |
2004-11-09, 12:28 PM | #7 |
If something goes wrong at the plant, blame the guy who can't speak English
Join Date: Nov 2003
Location: Michigan
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I'd list those sites if you submit them. That niche is my favorite one to review...
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2004-11-09, 04:51 PM | #8 |
A woman is like beer. They look good, they smell good, and you'd step over your own mother just to get one!
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Thanks for the comments guys!
So far I had no problems getting listet with masked sponsor code...as long as you keep the right domain all is fine... |cool| |
2004-11-10, 04:12 AM | #9 |
You tried your best and you failed miserably. The lesson is 'never try'
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Looks pretty good to me... But I have a few suggestions (that may or may not reflect the views of many LL owners).
I wouldn't hide the status window text for your sponsor links... im guessing that would cause problems with some people. Also, I think your advertising my be a little excessive... that's alot of link text in a big font. The gallery links are the smallest links on the main page, I usually try to make them stand out a little more. |
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