allright , is my free site ok now ?

mikeyx · 2005-08-17, 12:55 AM

after posting on here and checking out the links i re did my free site give me your opinon green guy and friends

of course i will change the recips , they are just a template right now

http://www.cuteteenvideo.com/free_movies/

Mateusz · 2005-08-17, 03:33 AM

Looking not bad but at start I suggest to remove CP keywords - usting word young on a teen site can get you banned quickly. Than I would remove this huge image on top and replace with some nice image/text with name of your site - as I suppose currently its not title of your site and if it is - its bit too long, try to keep your site name within 2-4 words.
Also another hint that rather wouldnt cause the declination - your sale text looks funny with such spelling " ,anyway" or double spaces...

Halfdeck · 2005-08-17, 03:39 AM

Hi Mikeyx,

The title "Exploitedteens exploitedteens exploited teens.." feels a bit spammy. Some LLs also prefer you create a title unique to the site instead of using the paysite name.

"One Guy and a video camera and his mission , too find the most fresh , young teens ..."

I'd rewrite that to "One guy ..and his mission to find the most fresh," without the space in front of your commas and Guy not capitalized. (not sure if you want to use the phrase "young teens" there).

"Click too get your membership" should be "Click to"

Also your pages are missing doctype and doesn't validate. You might want to make it validate if you want some additional SE traffic.

You have words like "avi" in your keyword meta, which doesn't appear on the page text. You have a slim chance of ranking for words like "avi" anyway, so why use it.

I'd add a third link on the pages to point back to the domain root.

Looks nice overall.

Greenguy · 2005-08-17, 05:07 AM

mikeyx - think for a minute....how old is a "young teen"

ponyman · 2005-08-17, 05:54 AM

Lots of misspelled words:

"One Guy and a video camera and his mission , too find the most fresh , young teens he can and get them naked on video fucking him ,anyway he can , be it promising to make the famous or paying them a little cash every chick has there price"

"CLICK TOO GET YOUR MEMBERSHIP AND - PLAY THE MOVIES "

"18 YOUR OLD TEEN ALLY

"

"PREVIEW 1#"

on this page: http://www.cuteteenvideo.com/free_movies/main.html I'd use two different images for the gallery links.

One more thing, I've seen the member's area of your sponsor and I don't think that chick with braces is in the member's area. Nati is in there, though.

mikeyx · 2005-08-17, 08:16 AM

LOL Thanks guys for exposing all my mistakes ill be back tomorrow , with a edited version

appreciate your help ,

Thnx

mikeyx · 2005-08-17, 08:17 AM

btw what is doctype?

Useless · 2005-08-17, 08:50 AM

I have mpgs set to open in a player within the browser, but on that site they're openin up in a new browser window instead fo the same.

Thumbler · 2005-08-17, 09:44 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by mikeyx

btw what is doctype?

Document type - basically it says which version of HTML your web page is written in.

mikeyx · 2005-08-18, 02:14 AM

allright what do you guys think now other than the doc type and the search engine keywords which ill fix last , let me know

http://www.cuteteenvideo.com/free_movies/

mikeyx · 2005-08-18, 09:43 PM

ello anyone out there?

mikeyx · 2005-08-19, 06:15 AM

mrenaud · 2005-08-19, 06:59 AM

Still see some grammer errors.

juggernaut · 2005-08-19, 11:49 AM

Yeah, I'm still new at this but from reading your site, either your english teacher really did not care, or you have not made it up to HS level english yet. You have commas where there should not be any which is making your sentences very hard to read. If your language is not english then I would ask someone for help.

"One Guy and a video camera and his mission , too find the most fresh teens he can and get them naked on video fucking him ,anyway possible , be it promising to make the famous or paying them a little cash every chick has there price."

Im a terrible person to comment on spelling and grammer, etc. But I know when I read something if it makes sence. I would word this something like this.
"One guy and a video camera. His mission? To find every chick (change as needed, bitch, whore, slut, etc) he can and see how much they will do on camera for money. Using every tactic he can, promising fame, fortune and just out right lieing. He gets these chicks naked, sucking and fucking. The more he lies the more holes open up."

I would also remove all the GG recips. I would think 1 is enough for that page but you have 9 of the exact same one. Leave one and get others, it will make the page look more professional. Sorry GG

but thats true. I look at peoples site from a surfers point of view as I'm by far not a pro here and seriously I would just go one page in and not bother downloading that content as it's been used a zillion times over, everyone knows the outcome with that girl already. I think she just lays there and dont do much but make a face when she gets a load on it. Just my opinon.

SortLinks · 2005-08-19, 04:44 PM

it doesnt fit in 800x600 imo

mikeyx · 2005-08-20, 06:04 AM

looks fine in 800x600 too me u got a 14 inch monitor?

SortLinks · 2005-08-20, 09:45 AM

yeah you 're rigth.. my rough approximation fails

mikeyx · 2005-08-21, 02:52 AM

hehe is ok dude , just gota fix my grammar now and to awnser the other dudes question i didint give a fuck about school , lol

pretty random u dissin my spelling and then saying

Im a terrible person to comment on spelling and grammer, etc. LOL

thnx for da help dough ,

no englishe

Pipboy · 2005-08-21, 03:26 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by mrenaud

Still see some grammer errors.

The irony.

2005-08-17, 12:55 AM	#1
mikeyx WHO IS FONZY!?! Don't they teach you anything at school? Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: New Zealand Posts: 42	allright , is my free site ok now ? after posting on here and checking out the links i re did my free site give me your opinon green guy and friends of course i will change the recips , they are just a template right now http://www.cuteteenvideo.com/free_movies/ __________________ <a href="http://www.teenieflixxx.com">Teenieflixxx.com - free teen movies</a>

2005-08-17, 03:39 AM	#3
Halfdeck You can now put whatever you want in this space :) Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: New Haven, CT Posts: 985	Hi Mikeyx, The title "Exploitedteens exploitedteens exploited teens.." feels a bit spammy. Some LLs also prefer you create a title unique to the site instead of using the paysite name. "One Guy and a video camera and his mission , too find the most fresh , young teens ..." I'd rewrite that to "One guy ..and his mission to find the most fresh," without the space in front of your commas and Guy not capitalized. (not sure if you want to use the phrase "young teens" there). "Click too get your membership" should be "Click to" Also your pages are missing doctype and doesn't validate. You might want to make it validate if you want some additional SE traffic. You have words like "avi" in your keyword meta, which doesn't appear on the page text. You have a slim chance of ranking for words like "avi" anyway, so why use it. I'd add a third link on the pages to point back to the domain root. Looks nice overall. __________________ Success is going from failure to failure without a loss of enthusiasm.

2005-08-17, 05:07 AM	#4
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2005-08-17, 05:54 AM	#5
ponyman Nobody gets into heaven without a glowstick Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: The Great Northwest Posts: 422	Lots of misspelled words: "One Guy and a video camera and his mission , too find the most fresh , young teens he can and get them naked on video fucking him ,anyway he can , be it promising to make the famous or paying them a little cash every chick has there price" "CLICK TOO GET YOUR MEMBERSHIP AND - PLAY THE MOVIES " "18 YOUR OLD TEEN ALLY " "PREVIEW 1#" on this page: http://www.cuteteenvideo.com/free_movies/main.html I'd use two different images for the gallery links. One more thing, I've seen the member's area of your sponsor and I don't think that chick with braces is in the member's area. Nati is in there, though. __________________ Dirty Old Men Sponsors - gay & straight

2005-08-17, 08:16 AM	#6
mikeyx WHO IS FONZY!?! Don't they teach you anything at school? Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: New Zealand Posts: 42	LOL Thanks guys for exposing all my mistakes ill be back tomorrow , with a edited version appreciate your help , Thnx __________________ <a href="http://www.teenieflixxx.com">Teenieflixxx.com - free teen movies</a>

2005-08-17, 03:33 AM	#2
Mateusz Screw you, guys. I'm going home. Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Gliwice, Poland Posts: 996	Looking not bad but at start I suggest to remove CP keywords - usting word young on a teen site can get you banned quickly. Than I would remove this huge image on top and replace with some nice image/text with name of your site - as I suppose currently its not title of your site and if it is - its bit too long, try to keep your site name within 2-4 words. Also another hint that rather wouldnt cause the declination - your sale text looks funny with such spelling " ,anyway" or double spaces...

2005-08-17, 08:17 AM	#7
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2005-08-17, 08:50 AM	#8
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2005-08-18, 02:14 AM	#10
mikeyx WHO IS FONZY!?! Don't they teach you anything at school? Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: New Zealand Posts: 42	allright what do you guys think now other than the doc type and the search engine keywords which ill fix last , let me know http://www.cuteteenvideo.com/free_movies/ __________________ <a href="http://www.teenieflixxx.com">Teenieflixxx.com - free teen movies</a>

2005-08-18, 09:43 PM	#11
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2005-08-19, 06:15 AM	#12
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2005-08-19, 06:59 AM	#13
mrenaud If something's hard to do, then it's not worth doing Join Date: Apr 2005 Posts: 240	Still see some grammer errors.

2005-08-19, 11:49 AM	#14
juggernaut Registered User Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Central Jersey! If I was rich and powerful I would dress as my avatar does. Posts: 1,448	Yeah, I'm still new at this but from reading your site, either your english teacher really did not care, or you have not made it up to HS level english yet. You have commas where there should not be any which is making your sentences very hard to read. If your language is not english then I would ask someone for help. "One Guy and a video camera and his mission , too find the most fresh teens he can and get them naked on video fucking him ,anyway possible , be it promising to make the famous or paying them a little cash every chick has there price." Im a terrible person to comment on spelling and grammer, etc. But I know when I read something if it makes sence. I would word this something like this. "One guy and a video camera. His mission? To find every chick (change as needed, bitch, whore, slut, etc) he can and see how much they will do on camera for money. Using every tactic he can, promising fame, fortune and just out right lieing. He gets these chicks naked, sucking and fucking. The more he lies the more holes open up." I would also remove all the GG recips. I would think 1 is enough for that page but you have 9 of the exact same one. Leave one and get others, it will make the page look more professional. Sorry GG but thats true. I look at peoples site from a surfers point of view as I'm by far not a pro here and seriously I would just go one page in and not bother downloading that content as it's been used a zillion times over, everyone knows the outcome with that girl already. I think she just lays there and dont do much but make a face when she gets a load on it. Just my opinon.

2005-08-19, 04:44 PM	#15
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2005-08-20, 06:04 AM	#16
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2005-08-20, 09:45 AM	#17
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2005-08-21, 02:52 AM	#18
mikeyx WHO IS FONZY!?! Don't they teach you anything at school? Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: New Zealand Posts: 42	hehe is ok dude , just gota fix my grammar now and to awnser the other dudes question i didint give a fuck about school , lol pretty random u dissin my spelling and then saying Im a terrible person to comment on spelling and grammer, etc. LOL thnx for da help dough , no englishe __________________ <a href="http://www.teenieflixxx.com">Teenieflixxx.com - free teen movies</a>