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2006-07-24, 08:42 PM
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Rock stars ... is there anything they don't know?
Join Date: Dec 2005
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Freesite review " be hard on me " ;]
Hi,
 How are you all doing today? So i've been on a little rampage building freesite's, i would like you all to check out one of my freesites and tell me what you think about it.. http://yizsir.com/freesites/amateur/...sucking_lucky/ ty ;]
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2006-07-24, 09:20 PM
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Bow Ties Are Cool
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: California
Posts: 9,654
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jaffie,
Do not know how many would reject for a 3 page site over a 4 page site. I would recommend slapping another page in between your index and galleries. This way you are covered with all LL's The one thing that will get you rejected is that your images are out of order across your 2 gallery pages. On a sales point you should really have at least 1 outgoing link to your sponsor with some nice text selling it. You will be surprised how many sales come from the index/warning page. I am sure there is more but my wife just showed up with dinner. Gotta go. Hope this helps! |
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2006-07-24, 09:33 PM
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Arghhhh...submit yer sites ya ruddy swabs!
Join Date: May 2004
Location: Sunny Florida!
Posts: 5,108
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Hey there Jaffie
 I'll jump in here and give ya a page by page... Entry page... Very clean...very bland...but VERY clean  Seriously, Robert is right...get yourself some ads on that page. You can have up to 3 outbound links...I suggest you use em. We're not giving away porn, we're selling it...or at least that's the goal You'd probably do yourself a big favor by perusing some of the listings on a few of the link sites you intend to submit to. Look at how other submitters do things...get yourself some...errr...inspiration. I have o to add here...do not directly copy anyone's work...that will get you into huge trouble. Not saying you're the kind of person that would do such a thing, but since you're new...it's gotta be said Main page...ooopsie...there is no main page...lol. Again, I agree with Robert. The beauty of the basic free site layout is it gives you 4 pages to sell the surfer...use that real estate as your disposal. Go ahead and add a 'main' page with your 3 allowed outbound links and your 2 gallery links. It's another sales page...and trust me on this...sales are yummy! Gallery one... Your text is very small and really blends into the page. Don't make it HUGE, but bump it up a few pixels. And don't be afraid to use something other than the default font. Right now, the text is so small and with your extra page breaks...it's almost close to a blind link. Not quite...but could be close enough to give you problems getting listed. Gallery two...pretty much the same comments as gallery one. However, the text link here...while still hard to see...it certainly not blind since it fully mentions the name of the paysite. Lastly, yep...you defintely want to get your pictures in order. The series of pics should flow through the site in sequence. Not a bad first attempt...tweak things a bit and ask for another look |
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2006-07-24, 09:47 PM
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Certified Nice Person
Join Date: Oct 2003
Location: Dirty Undies, NY
Posts: 11,268
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I once knew a guy named Leslie, but I've never met anyone named Leslie Leslie. |shocking|
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2006-07-24, 10:45 PM
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Wheither you think you can or you think you can't, Your right.
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: midwest
Posts: 2,274
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I agree with every one else, biggest thing you can do is more ads! I dont know about you, but I'm in this to make money. The more ads, the more chances for clicks, more clicks, more sales.
Did I use "more" enough? ..Believe it or not, not having many ads might get your rejected. Too clean of a site makes reviews and LL"s wonder if it's just to get listed and then the site being redirected. Sounds funny, but some times true. ronnie |
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2006-07-25, 04:48 AM
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You can now put whatever you want in this space :)
Join Date: Oct 2004
Location: New Haven, CT
Posts: 985
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I would remove the warning text on index. I'd also remove the LEAVE HERE link. Let them back pedal. LEAVE/ENTER is confusing, especially at 4 am. Sucking Lucky doesn't make sense. "Seductively beautiful"? nope. Cookie-cutter text will not be read. Last thing, I'd choose better content - though quality is good, its not making me hard
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2006-07-25, 11:07 AM
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There's Xanax in my thurible!
Join Date: Apr 2005
Location: Wherever they screw on my head
Posts: 2,441
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Personally I'd leave in the warning statement, just make it smaller or put it in a form box with a scroll. I'd also leave in the exit/leave link also as at least 1 big linklist prefers them.  Oh, and I personally hate mismatched thumbs. If 90% of your pictures are vertically longer then custom cut the thumbnails for the other 10% for a consistent look. But that's just me being anal. |
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