built my first freesite

born2blog · 2007-02-03, 09:49 PM

Well, I've never really ventured into the land of freesites but decided to give it a go. Here is my first example: http://www.lovelylizvicious.com/redhead-teen/index.html

Any comments/advice/suggestions are welcome, even if they are negative. Like I say, it's my first one so be as brutally honest as you'd like, I don't mind as long as it's constructive criticism.

SheepGuy · 2007-02-03, 10:05 PM

Nice site

Very clean, you've got room for another banner on your gallery pages but I don't know that it would helps sales to have one.
I like it.

born2blog · 2007-02-03, 10:17 PM

thanks SheepGuy, I appreciate any feedback!

Shark · 2007-02-03, 11:09 PM

Nice creature.
onlybestsex.com , rexporn.com and freesexhard.com will list your site

japamor · 2007-02-04, 04:34 AM

Hi born2blog

First thing I noticed is that you only have 1 linked sponsor bannner on your warning and main page plus 1 unlinked. You're allowed 3 and you might as well use them. Also the wording under your bottom banner just more or less repeats what's on the banner - try and say something new about the site - Gorgeous Ginger Teen or something.

Watch out for blind links on your main page. Those thumbs should be unlinked as you already have text links to each gallery.

On your gallery pages you've got a second sponsor link but you need to link that big top banner.

Its a nice looking site. Someone's got design skills! I'd certainly list it.
Cheers

born2blog · 2007-02-04, 09:48 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shark

Nice creature.
onlybestsex.com , rexporn.com and freesexhard.com will list your site

thanks a million, I will submit there

born2blog · 2007-02-04, 09:49 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by japamor

Hi born2blog

First thing I noticed is that you only have 1 linked sponsor bannner on your warning and main page plus 1 unlinked. You're allowed 3 and you might as well use them. Also the wording under your bottom banner just more or less repeats what's on the banner - try and say something new about the site - Gorgeous Ginger Teen or something.

Watch out for blind links on your main page. Those thumbs should be unlinked as you already have text links to each gallery.

On your gallery pages you've got a second sponsor link but you need to link that big top banner.

Its a nice looking site. Someone's got design skills! I'd certainly list it.
Cheers

Thanks for the kind words and great advice!! I'm sure over time I will get better at building freesites

Tobbe · 2007-02-04, 10:44 AM

Site is looking great born2blog!

ronnie · 2007-02-04, 12:54 PM

I agree looks real nice. As said, you could have more ads, why not take advantage. Also, just so you know, the banners you are using usually dont pull much for clicks, that size and type. We all want to get as many surfers to the sponsor as possible...

Xallow · 2007-02-04, 01:06 PM

Nice looking site, though I agree that You need to do more to drive people to click those links to the sponsor. I would definately accept it

Lemmy · 2007-02-04, 01:46 PM

Nice site. I would definitely list it.

bluemoney · 2007-02-04, 02:45 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lemmy

Nice site. I would definitely list it.

I agree. Also nice use of colors imho

Mateusz · 2007-02-05, 04:21 AM

Title could be a bit shorter (3, eventually 4 words) but site itself looks great.

2007-02-03, 09:49 PM	#1
born2blog Operator! Give me the number for 911! Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 130	built my first freesite Well, I've never really ventured into the land of freesites but decided to give it a go. Here is my first example: http://www.lovelylizvicious.com/redhead-teen/index.html Any comments/advice/suggestions are welcome, even if they are negative. Like I say, it's my first one so be as brutally honest as you'd like, I don't mind as long as it's constructive criticism. __________________ Erotic Porno Tube

2007-02-03, 10:05 PM	#2
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2007-02-03, 10:17 PM	#3
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2007-02-03, 11:09 PM	#4
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2007-02-04, 04:34 AM	#5
japamor I Love Turkish Delight, they're very moreish. Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: UK Posts: 578	Hi born2blog First thing I noticed is that you only have 1 linked sponsor bannner on your warning and main page plus 1 unlinked. You're allowed 3 and you might as well use them. Also the wording under your bottom banner just more or less repeats what's on the banner - try and say something new about the site - Gorgeous Ginger Teen or something. Watch out for blind links on your main page. Those thumbs should be unlinked as you already have text links to each gallery. On your gallery pages you've got a second sponsor link but you need to link that big top banner. Its a nice looking site. Someone's got design skills! I'd certainly list it. Cheers __________________

2007-02-04, 10:44 AM	#8
Tobbe If something goes wrong at the plant, blame the guy who can't speak English Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: North Sweden Posts: 301	Site is looking great born2blog! __________________ Free Site Business (Add your Linklists, Free Sites here.) ICQ: 474-501-452

2007-02-04, 12:54 PM	#9
ronnie Wheither you think you can or you think you can't, Your right. Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: midwest Posts: 2,274	I agree looks real nice. As said, you could have more ads, why not take advantage. Also, just so you know, the banners you are using usually dont pull much for clicks, that size and type. We all want to get as many surfers to the sponsor as possible...

2007-02-04, 01:06 PM	#10
Xallow Hello, is this President Clinton? Good! I figured if anyone knew where to get some tang it would be you Join Date: May 2006 Location: Denmark Posts: 447	Nice looking site, though I agree that You need to do more to drive people to click those links to the sponsor. I would definately accept it __________________ Porn Safe Submit Free Sites Porn Party Porn Submit Free Sites

2007-02-04, 01:46 PM	#11
Lemmy You can now put whatever you want in this space :) Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Next door to a kid with a moped. Posts: 1,492	Nice site. I would definitely list it. __________________ BUY MY PORNSITES!

2007-02-05, 04:21 AM	#13
Mateusz Screw you, guys. I'm going home. Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Gliwice, Poland Posts: 996	Title could be a bit shorter (3, eventually 4 words) but site itself looks great.