First site please review & let me know if I am on the right track

TheStig · 2005-01-13, 10:28 AM

Hi all

Well here is my first site so can I have some feedback please as I don't want to get blacklisted for some thing I may have done wrong.

http://ondemandvids.com/jim-slip-ana...ite-stockings/

Please let me know if I am on the right track?.

Regards

The Stig

Greenguy · 2005-01-13, 10:33 AM

The link to Richard is incorrect & opens in a new window (which is not allowed by me & a few others)

neticule · 2005-01-13, 10:35 AM

looks good, a few problems though.

first off, on your main page you need to have text "Gallery 1" and "Gallery 2"by the thumbs that goto the galleries, you will end up being denied a listing at some places because of this.

second, you have FIVE sponsor links on your main page, maximum is 3!

other then that i cant see anything else, although im sure some other gg&j members will jump in with suggestions.

neticule · 2005-01-13, 10:37 AM

my bad, i did not notice 2 of the links on your main page goto galleries, since they do no have "gallery 1/2" text in them.

either use the thumbs with text to link to the galleries, or just text, no reason to have it like you do, just makes it hard for the surfers to navigate

TheStig · 2005-01-13, 10:38 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Greenguy
The link to Richard is incorrect & opens in a new window (which is not allowed by me & a few others)

Many thanks GG I will chang that right now

TheStig · 2005-01-13, 10:45 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by neticule
looks good, a few problems though.

first off, on your main page you need to have text "Gallery 1" and "Gallery 2"by the thumbs that goto the galleries, you will end up being denied a listing at some places because of this.

second, you have FIVE sponsor links on your main page, maximum is 3!

other then that i cant see anything else, although im sure some other gg&j members will jump in with suggestions.

Thanks for the comments RE
"second, you have FIVE sponsor links on your main page, maximum is 3!"

Their are ony 3 links to sponcer the ones above & below the banner near the bottom goto the galleries

I have added "Gallery 1" & 2 under the thumbs now & will uplaod again

TheStig · 2005-01-13, 01:56 PM

When I submit it in the comments do I need to not put words like fucking ect & more like "2 gallaries of real UK amateur babes in fishnet stockings "??????

neticule · 2005-01-13, 02:05 PM

for a description you can use "fucking" i do believe. there is no need to use "2 galleries of" though

TheStig · 2005-01-13, 02:08 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by neticule
for a description you can use "fucking" i do believe. there is no need to use "2 galleries of" though

Tks mate

well I have my tin hat on so I had best submit it then

2005-01-13, 10:28 AM	#1
TheStig Banned Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: The World Posts: 104	First site please review & let me know if I am on the right track Hi all Well here is my first site so can I have some feedback please as I don't want to get blacklisted for some thing I may have done wrong. http://ondemandvids.com/jim-slip-ana...ite-stockings/ Please let me know if I am on the right track?. Regards The Stig

2005-01-13, 10:33 AM	#2
Greenguy The Original Greenguy (Est'd 1996) & AVN HOF Member - I Crop Pics For Thumbs In My Sleep Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Blasdell, NY (shithole suburb south of Buffalo) Posts: 41,929	The link to Richard is incorrect & opens in a new window (which is not allowed by me & a few others) __________________ Promote POV Porn Cash By Building & Submitting Galleries to the Porn Luv Network

2005-01-13, 10:35 AM	#3
neticule A boy without mischief is like a bowling ball without a liquid center Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 437	hmm looks good, a few problems though. first off, on your main page you need to have text "Gallery 1" and "Gallery 2"by the thumbs that goto the galleries, you will end up being denied a listing at some places because of this. second, you have FIVE sponsor links on your main page, maximum is 3! other then that i cant see anything else, although im sure some other gg&j members will jump in with suggestions. __________________ Mom, I'm done! Come wipe!

2005-01-13, 10:37 AM	#4
neticule A boy without mischief is like a bowling ball without a liquid center Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 437	hmm my bad, i did not notice 2 of the links on your main page goto galleries, since they do no have "gallery 1/2" text in them. either use the thumbs with text to link to the galleries, or just text, no reason to have it like you do, just makes it hard for the surfers to navigate __________________ Mom, I'm done! Come wipe!

2005-01-13, 02:05 PM	#8
neticule A boy without mischief is like a bowling ball without a liquid center Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 437	hmm for a description you can use "fucking" i do believe. there is no need to use "2 galleries of" though __________________ Mom, I'm done! Come wipe!

2005-01-13, 01:56 PM	#7
TheStig Banned Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: The World Posts: 104	When I submit it in the comments do I need to not put words like fucking ect & more like "2 gallaries of real UK amateur babes in fishnet stockings "??????