Need Review

ronnie · 2005-03-28, 09:02 AM

I agree, a little on the blah side. And the ads dont really stand out.

ronnie

Useless · 2005-03-28, 09:15 AM

Those colors aren't overly enticing. Rather drab, don't you think? I'd make the thumbs a bit bigger and clearer. The one I downloaded was only 2.5kb, so you have room to play. Your target should be 5-7kb each depending on the initial pic quality. Also, in your text links, don't lowercase the paysite domain. Uppercase the first letter of each word so they are distinct, like LingerieSins.com. Otherwise is looks like one long indecipherable nonsensical word. There are a couple of minor spelling errors you could fix as well.

It's listable in its present form, but it could be much better with just a little tweaking.

2005-03-28, 09:15 AM	#2
Useless Certified Nice Person Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Dirty Undies, NY Posts: 11,268	Those colors aren't overly enticing. Rather drab, don't you think? I'd make the thumbs a bit bigger and clearer. The one I downloaded was only 2.5kb, so you have room to play. Your target should be 5-7kb each depending on the initial pic quality. Also, in your text links, don't lowercase the paysite domain. Uppercase the first letter of each word so they are distinct, like LingerieSins.com. Otherwise is looks like one long indecipherable nonsensical word. There are a couple of minor spelling errors you could fix as well. It's listable in its present form, but it could be much better with just a little tweaking. __________________ Click here to purchase a bridge I'm selling.

2005-03-28, 09:02 AM	#1
ronnie Wheither you think you can or you think you can't, Your right. Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: midwest Posts: 2,274	I agree, a little on the blah side. And the ads dont really stand out. ronnie