please review my site

O-K-N · 2005-06-26, 12:55 PM

hi everyone.
i need your opinions about my free site.
My English is not enough.So i make a alot of mistakes.help me on this way.

And i put a gif on index to promote sponsor.Can i use anything like that? What do u think?

http://www.dailyfreeporn.net/free/bigtitsfucked/

madleinx · 2005-06-26, 02:03 PM

Looks okay for the most part....On your gallery pages, you have too many links in your text. You linked each line of text separately, so "Click here for the tour" is actually 3 links, instead of only one. Same thing with the text at the top. I don't know if you'd get rejected for that or not, since it is still one ad.

You might want to work on the title....It sounds like a boobs site, but it's hardcore....Don't know if it would make a difference or not though. I'm sure some of the more knowledgable folks here can tell you.

Good luck with your sites!

O-K-N · 2005-06-26, 02:30 PM

thanks for your reply any idea?

Certifiedbitch · 2005-06-27, 06:22 AM

i think your title doesn't correspond on the content of your site.

Edwin · 2005-06-27, 04:26 PM

You might get a few more helpful answers if you post it in the link list section of the board.

Xeno · 2005-06-28, 06:41 AM

I think its ok...and as madleinx said about the links "On your gallery pages, you have too many links in your text. You linked each line of text separately...." Just making it one link would work best.

The only thing I would say is that I would probably still approve the site if it was submitted to my link directory, but would give a few design pointers on your layout and colour coordination. You might want to try to keep your thumbs all the same such as all verticle or all horizontal...not a major issue, but some LL's and directories might say something.

Keep at it though....every gallery site you create will only get better with each one

Halfdeck · 2005-06-29, 11:24 PM

Hey OKN,

One minor thing I noticed in your source is you have no keyword/description metas. Also, on your index.html and gallery pages, the <HTML></HTML> and <DOCTYPE> are missing. You also may want to use an ICRA tag, and add ALTs to your images.

P.S. Using "gallery 1: Hardcore blonde fucking" and/or adding a TITLE="Blonde fucked from behind" (for example) may get better SE hits later on than just "Gallery 1".

The gif on the index page was too small on my monitor to read, and wasn't flashy enough to grab my attention. But I'm pretty sure it's not breaking any LL rules.

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2005-06-26, 12:55 PM	#1
O-K-N Rock stars ... is there anything they don't know? Join Date: Feb 2005 Posts: 15	please review my site hi everyone. i need your opinions about my free site. My English is not enough.So i make a alot of mistakes.help me on this way. And i put a gif on index to promote sponsor.Can i use anything like that? What do u think? http://www.dailyfreeporn.net/free/bigtitsfucked/

2005-06-26, 02:03 PM	#2
madleinx Trying is the first step towards failure Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Big Easy, or Disneyland for Grown-Ups Posts: 120	Looks okay for the most part....On your gallery pages, you have too many links in your text. You linked each line of text separately, so "Click here for the tour" is actually 3 links, instead of only one. Same thing with the text at the top. I don't know if you'd get rejected for that or not, since it is still one ad. You might want to work on the title....It sounds like a boobs site, but it's hardcore....Don't know if it would make a difference or not though. I'm sure some of the more knowledgable folks here can tell you. Good luck with your sites! __________________ <A HREF="http://apps.ClickCash.com/cgi/cc_refer.exe?acct=JUSTMARIE" target="_top">$40 PPS and up on FREE signups! All niches and tons of promo content!</A>

2005-06-27, 06:22 AM	#4
Certifiedbitch You can now put whatever you want in this space :) Join Date: Jun 2004 Posts: 547	i think your title doesn't correspond on the content of your site. __________________ www.idealbandwidth.com Hosting Solutions Starting at $18 per Mbps ICQ: 223-034-292 siena@idealbandwidth.com

2005-06-28, 06:41 AM	#6
Xeno Do you want the job done right, or do you want it done fast? Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Canada Posts: 494	I think its ok...and as madleinx said about the links "On your gallery pages, you have too many links in your text. You linked each line of text separately...." Just making it one link would work best. The only thing I would say is that I would probably still approve the site if it was submitted to my link directory, but would give a few design pointers on your layout and colour coordination. You might want to try to keep your thumbs all the same such as all verticle or all horizontal...not a major issue, but some LL's and directories might say something. Keep at it though....every gallery site you create will only get better with each one __________________ Why I never sleep anymore... Web Designing

2005-06-29, 11:24 PM	#7
Halfdeck You can now put whatever you want in this space :) Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: New Haven, CT Posts: 985	Hey OKN, One minor thing I noticed in your source is you have no keyword/description metas. Also, on your index.html and gallery pages, the <HTML></HTML> and <DOCTYPE> are missing. You also may want to use an ICRA tag, and add ALTs to your images. P.S. Using "gallery 1: Hardcore blonde fucking" and/or adding a TITLE="Blonde fucked from behind" (for example) may get better SE hits later on than just "Gallery 1". The gif on the index page was too small on my monitor to read, and wasn't flashy enough to grab my attention. But I'm pretty sure it's not breaking any LL rules. __________________ Success is going from failure to failure without a loss of enthusiasm.

2005-06-26, 02:30 PM	#3
O-K-N Rock stars ... is there anything they don't know? Join Date: Feb 2005 Posts: 15	thanks for your reply any idea?

2005-06-27, 04:26 PM	#5
Edwin If something goes wrong at the plant, blame the guy who can't speak English Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 33	You might get a few more helpful answers if you post it in the link list section of the board.

2005-06-30, 01:24 PM	#8
content Internet! Is that thing still around? Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 2	Hello O-K-N Please check your private messages. Thanks Click on User CP on the navigation bar at the top of this page to find them.