Critique my freesite please

Dave S · 2005-11-01, 12:34 AM

Can anyone spare a minute or 2 to crititque my freesite?

http://www.xxxchicks.org/wild-drunke.../drunk-girls-/

Would you list it? Is it any good? What changes would you make and amny other comments.

Cheers!

skopintsev · 2005-11-01, 04:47 AM

someone could have a problem with "agresive" banner on your frontpage.. I"d list it because of very nice content

Surfn · 2005-11-01, 05:36 AM

I'd list it

ronnie · 2005-11-01, 11:00 AM

It's better than most, but could use some fixing, like adding cell space on your tables so the text is not right against other elements. Also, on the main page, the linked text by the larger banner is all out of wack. First line right after the graphic is one word, then the rest does down centered oddly.

Only other drawback is that content is really getting used alot. Might not get listed many places because it might be over used. And of course some places dont list sponsor content in the first place.

ronnie

MrYum · 2005-11-01, 11:13 AM

Other than the widely used sponsor content, you may also run into listing problems with those blind links.

"Click Here for Pretty Girls with Wet Pussies"
"Click Here for Full Length Movies"
"Click Here to See the Movies of this Totally Wild Fuckfest"
"Want to See More Group Fucking and Mad Parties? Then Click Here"

Those all look pretty blind to me

Dave S · 2005-11-01, 12:12 PM

Cheers guys!

Whats wrong with the banner? Is it because the animation is very flashy, would something a little more subdued be better?

skopintsev · 2005-11-01, 01:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dave S

Cheers guys!

Whats wrong with the banner? Is it because the animation is very flashy, would something a little more subdued be better?

Exactly... But it is up to rewiewers how big problem is it.. I"d list it despite of that

Dave S · 2005-11-01, 01:19 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ronnie

It's better than most, but could use some fixing, like adding cell space on your tables so the text is not right against other elements. Also, on the main page, the linked text by the larger banner is all out of wack. First line right after the graphic is one word, then the rest does down centered oddly.

That'll teach me for now previewing in IE...

Pretty dumb really but in my defence it was 4am... the time of day when all my major screwups take place.

Dave S · 2005-11-01, 01:20 PM

Didn't realised I had used the words "click here" so many times!

What do you suggest instead of the links you say are blind? I always thought blind links were when you had a thumb or something that linked to a sponsor.

I guess if I changed the words "click here" to "join" they would no longer be blind?

Like "join now for full length movies"?

Halfdeck · 2005-11-01, 06:12 PM

I never use banners with a "strobe" effect - they probably piss off surfers more than anything else and looking at them gives me a headache |shocking|

Also, because the banners don't say "hardcorepartying.com", it's unclear whether "hardcore partying" is a sales pitch or a site name, so the banner is blind, making any text links around it blind also unless you mention the site by name.

There's a thread here regarding blind links by MadMax http://www.greenguysboard.com/board/...ad.php?t=23441

Simple solution would be mentioning the site name in your text/links in a way that makes it clear "Partying Hardcore" is a paysite.

Dave S · 2005-11-01, 07:44 PM

Thanks for the link. I never realised people saw some of those things as blind links, Maybe that's why some of the big sites reject my galleries. I'm still a relative newbie, about 5 months in, but I'm still learning things everyday. In this case something that i should have learnt much earlier.

Dave S · 2005-11-01, 08:12 PM

OK I've tweaked it. Anyone fancy a follow up look to see how it's looking now. I changed the links, hopefully they are all ok now, and I changed that strobe banner for one a little less intense.

http://www.xxxchicks.org/wild-drunke.../drunk-girls-/

MrYum · 2005-11-01, 09:22 PM

Links look mucho better...well done Dave

One tiny detail...your exit link leads to a doa site. Not a big deal, probably not many would decline you for it. But, if you're gonna have a link there...it should probably work

Halfdeck · 2005-11-01, 09:42 PM

Nice improvements Dave

One thing I noticed this time around is the blind link to AR Pass. I know D Partying is part of the AR network but for surfers who don't know, it's confusing.

Dave S · 2005-11-01, 10:03 PM

Cheers again guys!

Are there any good lists of places to submit to knocking about or do I just trawl peoples sigs on this board?

Looking forward to my first proper submission now.

Halfdeck · 2005-11-01, 10:18 PM

The Link List forum on this board is a good place to look.

I'd start my submission with the lists owned by people who posted here though

There's also a good (partial) list of sites you can submit to here: http://www.greenguysboard.com/board/...ad.php?t=25191

KG Gary · 2005-11-02, 03:45 AM

Here's a little treasure of a page for submitters - or at least I think it is!
http://www.tons-porn.com/adult_webmaster/

Dave S · 2005-11-02, 03:39 PM

Thanks guys, thats more than enough sites to be going on with

MrYum · 2005-11-02, 04:03 PM

Give em hell Dave...looks like you're getting off on the right foot

2005-11-01, 12:34 AM	#1
Dave S Aw, Dad, you've done a lot of great things, but you're a very old man, and old people are useless Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Manchester, UK Posts: 29	Critique my freesite please Can anyone spare a minute or 2 to crititque my freesite? http://www.xxxchicks.org/wild-drunke.../drunk-girls-/ Would you list it? Is it any good? What changes would you make and amny other comments. Cheers!

2005-11-01, 05:36 AM	#3
Surfn If you don’t take a chance the Angels won’t dance Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Earth on occasion Posts: 8,812	I'd list it __________________ Surfn's Links Are you a partner?

2005-11-01, 11:13 AM	#5
MrYum Arghhhh...submit yer sites ya ruddy swabs! Join Date: May 2004 Location: Sunny Florida! Posts: 5,108	Other than the widely used sponsor content, you may also run into listing problems with those blind links. "Click Here for Pretty Girls with Wet Pussies" "Click Here for Full Length Movies" "Click Here to See the Movies of this Totally Wild Fuckfest" "Want to See More Group Fucking and Mad Parties? Then Click Here" Those all look pretty blind to me __________________ Porno Flixxx Submissions SOTI Site Submissions Free Porn Resource Submissions

2005-11-01, 06:12 PM	#10
Halfdeck You can now put whatever you want in this space :) Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: New Haven, CT Posts: 985	I never use banners with a "strobe" effect - they probably piss off surfers more than anything else and looking at them gives me a headache \|shocking\| Also, because the banners don't say "hardcorepartying.com", it's unclear whether "hardcore partying" is a sales pitch or a site name, so the banner is blind, making any text links around it blind also unless you mention the site by name. There's a thread here regarding blind links by MadMax http://www.greenguysboard.com/board/...ad.php?t=23441 Simple solution would be mentioning the site name in your text/links in a way that makes it clear "Partying Hardcore" is a paysite. __________________ Success is going from failure to failure without a loss of enthusiasm.

2005-11-01, 09:22 PM	#13
MrYum Arghhhh...submit yer sites ya ruddy swabs! Join Date: May 2004 Location: Sunny Florida! Posts: 5,108	Links look mucho better...well done Dave One tiny detail...your exit link leads to a doa site. Not a big deal, probably not many would decline you for it. But, if you're gonna have a link there...it should probably work __________________ Porno Flixxx Submissions SOTI Site Submissions Free Porn Resource Submissions

2005-11-01, 04:47 AM	#2
skopintsev Well you know boys, a nuclear reactor is a lot like women. You just have to read the manual and press the right button Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 154	someone could have a problem with "agresive" banner on your frontpage.. I"d list it because of very nice content

2005-11-01, 11:00 AM	#4
ronnie Wheither you think you can or you think you can't, Your right. Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: midwest Posts: 2,274	It's better than most, but could use some fixing, like adding cell space on your tables so the text is not right against other elements. Also, on the main page, the linked text by the larger banner is all out of wack. First line right after the graphic is one word, then the rest does down centered oddly. Only other drawback is that content is really getting used alot. Might not get listed many places because it might be over used. And of course some places dont list sponsor content in the first place. ronnie

2005-11-01, 12:12 PM	#6
Dave S Aw, Dad, you've done a lot of great things, but you're a very old man, and old people are useless Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Manchester, UK Posts: 29	Cheers guys! Whats wrong with the banner? Is it because the animation is very flashy, would something a little more subdued be better?

2005-11-01, 01:20 PM	#9
Dave S Aw, Dad, you've done a lot of great things, but you're a very old man, and old people are useless Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Manchester, UK Posts: 29	Didn't realised I had used the words "click here" so many times! What do you suggest instead of the links you say are blind? I always thought blind links were when you had a thumb or something that linked to a sponsor. I guess if I changed the words "click here" to "join" they would no longer be blind? Like "join now for full length movies"?

2005-11-01, 07:44 PM	#11
Dave S Aw, Dad, you've done a lot of great things, but you're a very old man, and old people are useless Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Manchester, UK Posts: 29	Thanks for the link. I never realised people saw some of those things as blind links, Maybe that's why some of the big sites reject my galleries. I'm still a relative newbie, about 5 months in, but I'm still learning things everyday. In this case something that i should have learnt much earlier.

2005-11-01, 08:12 PM	#12
Dave S Aw, Dad, you've done a lot of great things, but you're a very old man, and old people are useless Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Manchester, UK Posts: 29	OK I've tweaked it. Anyone fancy a follow up look to see how it's looking now. I changed the links, hopefully they are all ok now, and I changed that strobe banner for one a little less intense. http://www.xxxchicks.org/wild-drunke.../drunk-girls-/

2005-11-01, 09:42 PM	#14
Halfdeck You can now put whatever you want in this space :) Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: New Haven, CT Posts: 985	Nice improvements Dave One thing I noticed this time around is the blind link to AR Pass. I know D Partying is part of the AR network but for surfers who don't know, it's confusing. __________________ Success is going from failure to failure without a loss of enthusiasm.

2005-11-01, 10:03 PM	#15
Dave S Aw, Dad, you've done a lot of great things, but you're a very old man, and old people are useless Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Manchester, UK Posts: 29	Cheers again guys! Are there any good lists of places to submit to knocking about or do I just trawl peoples sigs on this board? Looking forward to my first proper submission now.

2005-11-01, 10:18 PM	#16
Halfdeck You can now put whatever you want in this space :) Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: New Haven, CT Posts: 985	The Link List forum on this board is a good place to look. I'd start my submission with the lists owned by people who posted here though There's also a good (partial) list of sites you can submit to here: http://www.greenguysboard.com/board/...ad.php?t=25191 __________________ Success is going from failure to failure without a loss of enthusiasm.

2005-11-02, 03:45 AM	#17
KG Gary I can now put whatever I want in this space Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: South East UK Posts: 744	Here's a little treasure of a page for submitters - or at least I think it is! http://www.tons-porn.com/adult_webmaster/

2005-11-02, 03:39 PM	#18
Dave S Aw, Dad, you've done a lot of great things, but you're a very old man, and old people are useless Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Manchester, UK Posts: 29	Thanks guys, thats more than enough sites to be going on with

2005-11-02, 04:03 PM	#19
MrYum Arghhhh...submit yer sites ya ruddy swabs! Join Date: May 2004 Location: Sunny Florida! Posts: 5,108	Give em hell Dave...looks like you're getting off on the right foot __________________ Porno Flixxx Submissions SOTI Site Submissions Free Porn Resource Submissions