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2006-06-25, 09:02 PM
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Aw, Dad, you've done a lot of great things, but you're a very old man, and old people are useless
Join Date: May 2006
Posts: 27
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New gallery for your review
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2006-06-26, 03:30 AM
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No matter how good you are at something, there's always about a million people better than you
Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: MA, USA
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Hey Grinch,
I took a quick peek at your gallery and thought it looked pretty good. I do think your ad text could pop a bit more though and I'm not sure about the big block of text in the middle...might need a little space to breathe...you know, make it a bit easier for the surfer to catch as they glance over the thumbs...  Keep at it and good luck. Regards, SF |
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2006-06-30, 07:49 PM
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Aw, Dad, you've done a lot of great things, but you're a very old man, and old people are useless
Join Date: May 2006
Posts: 27
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Thanks SF. I debated about the text. The vid that goes with it is really hott, so I wanted to allude to it. Guess I went overboard lol
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2006-07-03, 06:21 PM
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No matter how good you are at something, there's always about a million people better than you
Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: MA, USA
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Hey Grinch,
Descriptive and alluring text can bring the surfer in and get them excited and that's a VERY good thing but it needs to be presented in a way that will attract the surfer's attention. The surfers that show up at your gallery are there to see the free pics/vids and most of them have their uni-vision enabled . If you want them to even see your sales pitch you need to grab their attention and then QUICKLY sell them on your sponsor.I hope that makes sense... Regards, SF |
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