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2008-07-30, 01:37 AM
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WHO IS FONZY!?! Don't they teach you anything at school?
Join Date: Jul 2008
Location: Colorado
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this is my first FreeSite... YAY!
papaGMP helped me... blame him.
 A Toy For Thena please provide feeback or this bitch is going up as is. thank you! |
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2008-07-30, 01:41 AM
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It's the end of the world as we know it, and I feel fine
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2008-07-30, 01:44 AM
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That'll teach you to leave your sister unattended.....
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Looks like shit to me - why isn't there some guy ramming his cock in her?
Oh ya, that's right, her boyfriend couldn't get it up......... I'll let the rest of you tear up Jack's first FS - she's already heard what I had to say. |egg| |
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2008-07-30, 01:49 AM
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WHO IS FONZY!?! Don't they teach you anything at school?
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Location: Colorado
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thank you sheepguy!
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2008-07-30, 02:10 AM
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My name is hashbury not assburry
Join Date: Oct 2007
Location: Tampa
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Damn Nice site
Gallery 1 - the bottom 2 videos are not linked. You also have room for another sponsor link. I think it would go good between the videos, Like you did in gallery 2. For your first freesite this is very good.
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2008-07-30, 02:50 AM
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WHO IS FONZY!?! Don't they teach you anything at school?
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Location: Colorado
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2008-07-30, 03:40 AM
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Progress rarely comes in buckets, it normally comes in teaspoons
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2008-07-30, 06:12 AM
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That which does not kill us, will try, try again.
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Hiya Jack
 On gallery 2 there's a bit of text you probably want to snip off. Just losing the word 'you' will fix this: "In fact, you we'll be posting some awesome hardcore vids of Thena on Real Colorado Girls - real fuckin soon!" HTH
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2008-07-30, 07:56 AM
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Former pr0n slinger.
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If I was you I'd put a least a <meta name="Description" content="Put text that will show up in the SE's here"> tag on your first page (or all your pages). That text will appear underneath your link when you page gets indexed by th SE's. It's also good for SEO.
Other than that, your first freesite looks like 29.5 times better than my first freesite back in the days  |
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2008-07-30, 08:02 AM
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Formerly known as TekAngel
Join Date: Feb 2007
Location: Valley of the Sun
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I wish my first FS looked that good. Good job!
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2008-07-30, 10:19 AM
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"Young dumb and full of cum"
Join Date: Jun 2007
Location: Porn Valley
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Nice job GMPcash-jack
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2008-07-30, 11:10 AM
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Bow Ties Are Cool
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: California
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Looks Great
A couple fixes to do and submit away. Look forward to listing it for ya. |
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2008-07-30, 11:44 AM
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Mean people suck, nice people swallow, are you mean or nice?
Join Date: Sep 2003
Location: Lower Alabama-The Redneck Riviera
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I'll list it...
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2008-07-30, 02:37 PM
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wtfwjd?
Join Date: May 2007
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